Pumpkin
is an EoFF Legend
Pinkasaurus Rex

Wow, that is awesome! You can give him kudos from me, as I really enjoyed those bits It's so nice that he's helping you out with this story so much. Ania often motivates me to work harder, and though she usually refrains from giving me direct ideas so that I can be the sole author of my stories (she is a great writer herself, though ), there are times when we brainstorm ideas and then I write them.

I'm really glad you like my idea. And even though I know they will have problems, I really hope things work out for Evie and Chuck. I mean, it's weird coming from me, but I think they make a cute couple XD

I just left you some feedback! If you have any more questions, feel free to ask I like your IX thread from what I've read in it so far. I'll try to respond to it ASAP.

Anyway, thanks for your feedback I'm glad you noticed that the relationship was rushed, because that later turned out to be the point. I say it like that because I never intended this story to be a romance. It was meant to focus on the paranormal aspect and how delving into these themes keeps those people from having a normal life and Evie and Chuck's relationship was intended to be completely platonic. Basically, I intended for it to be a sort of X-files thing with paranormal investigators instead of FBI agents. And then they went and fell in love. I did not intend for that to happen, and I don't think they did either, they just did. I think it was the whole situation and desperate need for someone who understands that pushed them together. Now, if I write any more stories with them (which I intend to do!), I'll probably delve into how crazy it is that this relationship is going so fast and what kind of problems they may face because of that. I figured that if I am going to write a love story then I don't want it to follow the Hollywood pattern of the guy getting the girl in the climax, I wanted to begin a tale with them getting together and then focus on how hard and interesting maintaining that relationship actually is.
I'm glad you liked it and I really appreciate that you had the patience to read through all of it It was a first for me on so many levels and I spent so much time on it, it felt like a huge risk.

It is up! My story is up! I would really appreciate it if you found the time to read it all and share some thoughts on it with me. But that's only if you really have the time for it, since it's really long this time around. I'll get to reading yours in just a minute

Well, it is until you get it written down Not that it's a bad thing. I think all books star out like that. It's pretty much the same with my book.

Me too You're a really great friend, shion. I wish you all the best. And I really love the story you're writing. Keep at it and who knows? Maybe someday we'll see each other's books at a store?

I'm fine. My heart seems really stable lately I have a lot to study, but I still always try to find time to write something. The prompt thread has helped me realize writing is something I love. And you guys are all so awesome, I feel so loved here on EoFF and I used to be such a loner

I know you've already posted your story, but I won't be reading it until I finish and upload mine, which will probably happen today. I will then write feedback for you ASAP. I'm so excited to read it!

How have you been doing lately?

Dude, my story is gonna be like three chapters and it already has 3.5 thousand words D:

Hiya! I finally caught up reading your pieces for the writing prompts. I enjoy all your characters and your writing style. Its very easy to sink into the story being told and leaves me wanting to know/read more

High. Haha I have percocet for the pain and LSO cause before my nose was so stuffed up I wasn't getting any oxygen at all through it, since they cleared it, I'm on an oxygen high too. Hahaha. Spent most the past few days playing xiii. Taking my rest time to get gamage in. While high, grinding didn't seem as tedious haha