Minami
took the door

Well as you can see from my Let's Play, I am also playing II today . I hope you're enjoying it.

It's pretty much a tie between V and II for my favorite. The whole series is great. I've owned them all at one point but I moved and only had II left. Thankfully my sweet boyfriend has gotten the rest of them for me (IV and V for Christmas) so now I am back to owning them all! I'm going to do a Suikoden marathon this year.

Who is your favorite character?

A bit sicky but okay. Playing some Suikoden V instead of cleaning like I should be.

How are you?

Hallo

Ah I see. I've been really into more slice of life/realistic fiction lately, but most of my big story ideas are fantasy related!

I see that you're trying to be active in our community. Maybe you'd like to join this fun little event?

http://home.eyesonff.com/wonder-squa...ret-santa.html

No problem! I enjoyed it! What kind of writing do you like to do generally?

I love your signature!

Holy cow! I really, really love your avy/sig set!

Hello! I really really liked your piece for the writing prompt thread! Thanks for participating. I'm pretty excited to see more of your stuff.

As far as criticism goes, I may have to read it again in the future when I don't have a headache like I've had the past couple of days, but here's the only thing I could come up with right now. You have some great details detailing the darkness and dirtiness of the room. You don't need to explicitly say "The dingy motel room was dark and dirty" as you already have sufficient details to describe that. That can add repetitiveness to writing and detract from it, even a little.

Also, I really love how you build up to the final moments in the short scene you wrote. I wasn't sure what to expect at the end, and as things grew more clear I found myself getting more and more anxious. Anyways, great job!