The vengeful sound shinobi...and a woman

I thought of what it would be like if Orochimaru had a student and what She(its a woman) would be like.

Also a woman addvertising beer

Comments please:) Helpful tips would be nice too:D

These are fun sketches! :D Mmm I would say not to crop the image so tightly and be a little loser with your strokes. You should try that, and I bet they'd be awesome!

I guess you could say that tight strokes is just my style.

The hands of the second one look a little too small, but other than that they're both pretty good sketches.