[A] Another Namie Amuro Drawing

This one is most definitely not my best, because that right eye is awful, but I do like the hair to the right and the lips, so eh. I'll try to fix up the eye and post it here later.

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b2...murolight1.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b2...AMIeamuro1.jpg

everyone can draw such nice things.

I fixed the eye a bit. I dunno which version I like better. The right eye was made the way it was to prevent the drawing to have a cross-eyed look, but it looks odd. This one looks odd too.

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b2...murodark22.jpg

Maybe this one is odd because of the lack of detail on the other eye?

EDIT: I tried to fix up the left eye.

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b2...urodark222.jpg

you have acheved my grateist chalenge...to draw a face.(wich is sadly true)

Thank you! Faces are pretty hard. I can only draw big faces.

she looks crosseyed and the mouth should be a bit to the right. also, try adding more details to the eye rather than leaving it black (unless the eyes itself are black then it's fine). the glare highlights in the eyes would be good too.