Printable View
I'm looking for feedback on my new webcomic. The basic premise of it is that a regular guy places an ad in the paper for a rommate to share the rent after his old roommate leaves and his new roommate turns out to be a zombie.
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6720/btz1a4ng.png
Graphics are kinda bad and I didn't laugh. Hopefully it gets better.
Looks good but ya might just wanna include something funny.
I like how the guy's eyes looked bigger before he got freaked out.
It will get funnier, I just have to get through the exposition. Peter [the guy] will get freaked out a lot. ;)
Here's my first comic featuring both of the characters in one panel.
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/8184/btz22gh.png
The jokes arent very funny. If you want I could help you a little with the jokes.
Bob The Zombie now has a website (albeit, still under construction in some areas). The comics I posted here are up and the latest one should be up by tonight.
Bob The Zombie