poems please write them hear

the light deem in her eyes are fading, the love for him has turnd in an uprore of hatred and betrayl. As she looks at the sky and takes her last breath all the anger and all she felt turnd to dust or snow , the rain washed all the tears from her closing eyes and the boy she once loved cryed "im sorry,im sorry" but the pleading apoliges where not helping her for she said"i love you even if you cheated"and sliped to the darkness where the rain sounded muffled and died in the darkness of her dreams and happyness. This is mine as an example i would really love it if you sumit yours.

oh, this will last.

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Good job on totally dodging something called the Writers Corner.

...Its always raining in my mind.:cry:

Yay for sarcastic remarks and not using the warn button! You guys make me so proud.

We have a Writer's Corner if you want to submit poetry, but usually it's just one thread per poem.