Path of Cerberus my NEW comic B)

ok its here Path of Cerberus Trail of Tears and Blood!oh and the first chapter is in color.And if you havent read Path of the Shadow id read it before reading this anywho enjoy!please tell me if it sucks arse or if its ok :D
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This is interesting. good job, and thanks for the colouring. :D

One again the panels seem a little cluttered.

thanx and sorry rengorithats the best i can do ;.; i cant make it like the comic books do for some reason i always mess up badly but i have improved

Yup. you have improved alot. Just keep up, you will be one of the greatest comic writters. :D

thanx owen but idk about that i cant even match up to Nobuhiro Watsuki (aka writer of rurouni kenshin <333)

Woo~ Go me xD

Thats rather awesome, indeed

What happened to me :O

well i guess you kept your tidal and return to work your a buisy man y'know!i got some more for ya but they're not in color :(
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Hehe, cool. keep them coming, I started to love this story. :D

RUFUS!!!:tongue:

NUUUUUUU!NOT RUFUS!!!!i swear i had this character WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAY before i even new what geostigma was back when i thought Vincents name was cerberus which was not that long ago actually.....plus i would tell you why he covers his face but i cant cause it would ruin the whole story hes not soposed to be like rufus and i had to find a way to cover him up and thats the best i could do ;.;:cry:

hey draco,*whispers* I just had this thought. don't voice it once more she gets mad fast. :(
keep going in this, as fast as possible. :bounce:

Ya got a point.:thumb:

I must say, that is a lot better. Not as small and hard to follow as the previous one! ^_^

yay thankyou did i make any spelling errors???

uh oh.........i c moving my uh comics has caused them to dissapear on here oh god i got alot of work to do heres this weeks comic tho sorry it took so long...
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i like the part where okami goes oh my ive said to much best face and hand eva