CONTEST: WHo's self-made FF is better?

Ok, I absolutely adore my idea: It stars a rich girl named Loriare Vaicare. She's 16, and has two siblings: Her Cahzarea (Cat-Person) adoptive black mage college-aged sister Raiden, and her 28 year-old Paladin brother named Hallard. Well, her dad, Charpser, is an owner of a company, and knows the president of Marshall, the richest and most powerful democratic nation in the world. Marshall has two allies, The Archapheligho, and St. Veronica. They are all in a war against the small and VERY cold Dobrey, who's leader is crazy. However, Loriare meets a traveler named Rione, a Vampire pirate girl, Vialan, a dragon man dragoon, Wachen, and a pair of polar opposite twins named Tyole and Toveed. (Oh, and I just HAPPEN to be a twin myself!) Actually, they meet like, 18 other people and fight the war against Ercydle C. Dobrey. They think he justs wants power, but he wants the three nations' space plan to communicate to the planet hundreds of miles away. with this plan, he'd be able to find a way to conquer the universe, and with the universe controlled, he can revive his long-lost wife. (YAY, no world destruction!)

Anyway, here are some common stuff put into terms...

The Theme- Family, seriously, family is a fantastic theme!
Cid- Cid is the prime minister of St. Veronica.
Chocobos- They roam around, and you can capture one.
Moogles- Mogty is a moogle and a playable character.
Girly Men- YES!!! NO GIRLY MEN!

The logo, a picture of Rione and loriare both looking out, with a light behind them... it's much cooler when put into full detail.