Final Fantasy Supreme (FF creation)

~~~Everyone save Dax is defeated, save Dax, who has 1 HP~~~
Dax: A-n-g-e-l.........
Angel: You desire my aid?
Dax: YES!
Angel: Very well....
*Angel incinerates Orb*
Dax: Uh........ugh.......
~~Screen fades to black and then back again. Everyone is there, and Dax is the last one to awaken~~
Josef: I got my gem! That bastard Xiang thought he could hold me back, but I got it!
Kathy: Very good...so, now what?
Trey: Ask the Great Poo-Bah.
Dax: Huh?
Trey: You.(Points to Dax)
Dax: I don't know.....I have no idea....

Jez: I think we have to go to the moon to defeat Tovart.
Mog: Kupo! But how do we get there?
Josef: Hey! What about my gem?
Erin: And those ultimate aikido's?
Dax: I know, let's ask Angel.

~~~At Angel Sanctuary~~~
Angel: You are close to your goal You must seek out that which is blocking your transformations. Afrter that, you must seek out Akidos with incredible power.
Barry, seek out Valhalla...you will gain the powers of a troop of Demi-godesses.
Trey, you must locate, and defeat Bahamut, King of Dragons.
Kathy, Gabriel, the sacred Angel is your goal.
All of you have amazing powers, which are yet untapped. You must find and exploit these powers.

Trey: So what are we waiting for let's seek them out.

Angel: Not so fast Trey... They are certain things that you all need to accomplish to earn them.

Trey: Yah, Like all of them does thos things... It's not like they will give they're powers to someone unworthy.

Angel: So you all know you're taking a risk here. You'll never knew what each of them wants and they're requirements to accomplish.

Trey: We'll be fine, don't worry.

Barry: Yah, we'll beat them all out to earn they're trust.

Angel: *hmm... this guys are intersting, I should try them out myself... I need to think of a test, someone worthy as how they spoke their words*

Dax: So, uh.....where are they?
Angel: You shall find their temples throughout the land.
Valhalla is found atop the highest peak in the land.

Bahamut is found where fire and water meet and coexist.

Gabriel is found where darkness has never touched.

Now go, and find these Legendary Akidos.
~~~Outside~~~
Dax: HEY!
Wedge: What's up?
Dax: Erin! Ask Dryad where they are?
Erin: Hmmm....I KNOW! Mount Acros! That should be where we find Valhalla!
Dax: Ugh.....why can't they be on GROUND level?

On Mnt Valhalla

*white figure*
White Figure:Ghaa haa haa! The tresure will be mine, or my name isn't Vander!
Intro:Vander, the white crusader who trapes the land looking for rare artifacts and objects that can bring him a good price!
Vander:No-one shall reach the top of the mountain before me, especially with all the traps I made! Ghaa haa haa!

~~Bottom of Mnt Valhalla~~

Dax:Damn, how we going to get all the way up there?!
Erin:Dryad says as long as we are weary, we can make it!
Dax:Okay then, let's go!

~~Vander~~

Vander:Those fools down there want my tresure?! Ghaa haa haa, my bear trap will put them in their place!

~~Dax~~

Dax:Tread carefully, who knows when we will encounter....
Barry:AAGGHHHH!!
Dax:Barry? What's wrong?!
Barry:My god damn leg's caught!!!!!
Dax:Ouch! That looks painful!
Barry:THAT AIN'T TH GOD DAMN WORDS FOR IT!!
Dax:Hold up, we'll get you out!
Erin and Dax use all their strength to prise open the trap!
Dax:C'mon, we got to be more careful!
Barry:These traps look recently placed! We have got to be careful! The owner might still be here!

Dungeon description:Some tunnels within the mountain lead to higher areas, but some lead to more traps. Traps include ber traps, cages (knocks a weapon's attack power down to break them) and boulder traps which knock the party down a floor.

Towards the top....
Dax and the gang stand in front of a very large door with a monster's head carved in the front of it.
Dax:This must be where the Aikido is!
Erin:It is. I can sense it's presence!
Barry:And maybe some trasure!!!
~~Everything goes dark, and the wind picks up~~
Vander:So, you ARE after my tresure!!
Barry:Who the....
Vander:I'm afraid that treasure is mine!
Barry:Vander?! Is that you?!
Vander:Barry?!
Barry:It's been awhile!
Vander:Indeed, I never got my revenge on you cutting my leg open!!!
Barry:It was a tiny wound, and it stopped the snake's poison anyway! I saved your life!
Vander:Pish posh! You just did that so you could steal the treasure!
Dax:Is this a friend of yours Barry?
Barry:We used to be buds, we'd go hunting for treasure all the time, till he got mardy and decided to become rivals insted!
Vander:MARDY?!!?
Vander draws a Rapier
Vander:At last, I shall destroy the infamous Treasure Hunter Barry! Ghaa haa haa!
Barry:Whatever...
Vander:En garde!
~~Boss Battle~~
Vander-no weakness
Dax
Barry
Erin
~~After awhile~~
Vander:Hmph, you think you have won?! This was only a test! I'll be back, you bet on it!
Vander jumps into the wind and glides away

Dax:Finally, now we can get to the Aikido....
Barry:Heh, looks like Vander lost out again!

~~~Enter a chamber, gold walls, 6 "Valkyries" on either side, and one that looks like an angel with light blue wings at the end~~~
Angel: Greetings, Chosen ones. My name is Brunhild. Angel told me you would arrive.
Dax:....this is Valhalla......
Brunhild: Well, not for too much longer...that Vander stole the Nexus, which holds us to this world. Retrieve it, and we will gladly lend our powers to you.

***Note! Switcheroo changes all 4 of your party members with a random Valkyrie. Brunhild RARELY appears. Also, if you reach THEIR (ALL 4!) limit, you will execute their technique (Final Strike)***

Dax:Barry, any idea where that Vander could have gotten to?
Barry:We used to have this den back in the olden days, we'd go there and stash our tresure there. No doubt he doesn't hang around there anymore, but there might be some clues.
Dax:Very well, lead the way Barry.

[FMV]

Barry enters the den with the party. Barry bends over to pick up a tatty old book. He opens it and starts to read his journal. A monologue can be heard as the camera spirals around Barry until it is directly above him. With a snap, Barry slams shut the book and bows his head, his body spasming. The camera zooms down to focus onto Barry from the front. Barry looks up, tears streaming down his face; his eyes flicker and are temporarily white, then return to red and black. Standing up, Barry turns back and stalks out of the den.

[/FMV]

Dax: Hey, Barry wait!
*Dax runs after Barry*
Dax: You ok?
Barry: Yeah....... Let's go and find Vander

Uhhh...hi guys. I just want to begin by saying I'm sorry for not liking your contributions to the "final fantasy re-written" forum. I just want to apologise for that, now that I've seen what you guys can do when your given a forum of your own. Sorry, sorry and again, sorry:(
Now, as a peace gift I'm giving you this picture of Barry...I drew it up in danish class and I want to know what you think of it...

Apology accepted? If so, then could you post and tell me if it is ok to show you my version of Barry (that is if noone else has drawn one)?

Barry: Just a sec....*Grabs the book*....his hideout should be around here somewhere. Ah yes. *Places the book on a statue, and a door slides open*
~~Vander's Hideout~~
Vander: Well, well, well....bravo. You haven't forgotten the old tricks. Well, catch me if you can!
Barry: Vander, wait!
~~Chase Vander through many corridors until....~~
Vander: troute! Dead end!
Barry: That's right asshole. Now hand over the Nexus.
Vander: OVER_MY_DEAD_BODY!
~~FF Supreme Boss Music
Team: Dax, Barry, [Party Member 1], [Party Member 2]

~Beat Vander~
~Recieve the Nexus~
Vander: Ugh....*collapses*
Dax: Is he....
Barry: No, just KOed. Serves ya' right, jackass.
Dax: What's up with you guys?
Barry: We used to be a team. We serched high and low for treasures. And we stashed all our treasures here. However one day, as we found our biggest cache yet. And I mean BIG! Suddenly, Vander looked ill...
Dax: The snake bite, right?
Barry: yeah, I cut the wound to release the poison, but, it got too deep. He lost the leg. I was replace *Reveals that Vander has a peg leg*
...ever since, he never forgave me.
Dax: Damn.
Barry: Just a sec. *Grabs The Cloak of Diablos, Lunar Hat, and Runic Gloves*
*Barry to Neo Barry*
Much like Summoning GF Diablos. Barry appears in a desolate wasteland. Bats swarm about him, and he turns absolutely BLACK. Then his hat turns into a standard Black Mage hat. He gets a LOONG flowing robe, and light silver armor. The Bats fly away to reveal Barry, transformed.
Barry: MUCH better.

Uhhh...hi guys. I just want to begin this by apologising to you for being so negative about your contributions to the "final fantasy VIII re-written" forum. I mean, I thought that you took it over and swallowed it down. But then I saw this forum and :whoa:!
I didn't know you had it in ya! Now, anyway, you probably don't want me to post here, but I bring a peace-gift. A picture of Barry, that I scetched up in danish class today. I have noooo idea if anyone has done one before but it's just how I see him.

Apology accepted? If so I will include the picture in my next post.

Gudni: Well, I have a good idea of what i want him to be, but what the hell. Go ahead. I'll give my opinion.

Damnit! It won't come:mad2: . There's just this message that I have an unvalid file, and I tried both .gif and .jpg!! Any tips about this sort of thing?