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No, still not OK. The rank number by your post should not be higher than 1 for any of them, and you can only learn 1st rank skills.
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Originally Posted by -=Squall-Leonhart=-
Your Black Mage has to be rank one, and you still need to change your last skill, Fire Veil is a rank 3 skill.
Ok.. i thinks it's all finally done.. for the ninja's skills i only done 2 because there was no other rank 1 skills than the 2 i've already chosen.
You're hunter has 9 skill points, so it can have 3 per skill and skills up to rank 3.
is it ok now?
If you only only want to spend three skill points, then yes.
Name: Briss Phoenixheart
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Race: Hume
Job: Magic Knight
Rank: 4
Allegiance: The Band of the Phoenix
Station: PhoenixKing/Leader of the band of the Phoenix
Biography: Born and raised in The Empire. Had a tough childhood due to his father. Started to study martial arts and black magic at 13 but disagreed with its principles. Started to train to become a Dark Knight wielding a Huge sword but also disagreed with the system so he combined the black magic he had learned with his sword skills and became a profecient Magic Knight. Having saw his skill, the empire employed him into the army but he disagreed with the generals tactics too often so he left and started his own journey when he was 22. After many years, Briss encountered the Phoenix which he wounded but escaped with many cuts and burns. Upon returning, being better prepared he told the Phoenix he did not wish to fight, yet being enraged it attacked where it was pierced through the core by Briss's sword. Upon its death, Briss felt its power and legacy. Taking its ashes and a large Phoenix feather, he demonstrated his prowess and began his own band of merc's known as the band of the phoenix, spreading the word that one day the phoenix will rise from its ashes and bring victory to its followers.
Physical Description: Long black hair that shines with a hint of flame and turns to burning flame when fighting with tanned olive skin. About 180cm tall with a slight muscular build with a defined body, strong forearms and shoulders. Gentle but set brown eyes which come alive with burning hatred during battle.
Personality Description: Likes to discuss battle tactics and techniques to the inner circle of the band of the phoenix. Likes to converse with woman and lass's, make them laugh and be in their company when not fighting or preparing for one. Turns on the arrogance when in the company of a lord and their kingdom. Has conversations independently or in small groups with his most trusted men and good friends.
Skills:
Fire Strike - 3
Blizzard Strike - 1
Runic - 2
Aero Strike - 1
Quake Strike - 2
Two-Handed Weapon Mastery - 3
EQUIPMENT
-Greatsword with large phoenix feather forged inside and small feather inside gem on the handle (Rank 4,800G)
--Increase Strength III(4000G)
--Increase Magic II (3000G)
---7800G
-Full Shiny Silver Phoenix Body Armour with phoenix crest (Rank 4,800G)
--Increased Vitality III (4000G)
--Increased Energy III (4000G)
--Initiative (3000G)
--Fire Ward (2000G)
---13,800G
Total Gil Spent: 21,600G
Name: Hugo Stratvia
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Race: Human
Job: Chemist
Rank: 3
Allegiance: The Republic of Schwartzvard
Station: High Chancellor (Monarch)
Biography: The third generation Stratvia who founded the republic long ago. His parents were both great magicians. Although his parents wished him to be a magician like they were, he decided to take a different path and became a chemist. He values his research more rather than politics, but when an offer came to him to run for chancellorship, he decided to run and won. Under his rule, he established the Industrial Revolution of the Republic.
Physical Description: (attached thumbnail)
Personality Description: Stern, upright, intelligent
Skills:
Rank1: Craft 2
Rank1: Throw Item 1
Rank3: Mix 1
Rank3: Throw Grenade 1
Both approved.
Name: Nesa Mikoto
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Race: Human
Job: Paladin
Rank: 3
Allegiance: The Golden City of Light
Station: Commander(monarch)
Biography: Abondened by his parents at an early age because of his white mage abilities, Nesa took to becoming a knight instead. In the times of danger in Eizon, the golden city was founded to be a last stand and he as most powerfull and intelligent warrior was put in leadership.
Physical Description: (attached thumbnail)
Personality Description: Wise, thoughtfull, kind and cautious
Skills:
Rank1: Protect Power: 3
Rank3: Stasis Sword Power: 3
Rank3: Split Punch Power: 3
Equipment(all skills rank 3):
Longsword:
Increased Strength II
Increased Magic II
Thunderstrike
Waterstrike
Shield:
Increased Defense II
Increased Energy II
Increased Vitality II
Earth Ward
Mythril chainmail:
Wind Ward
Water Ward
Thunder Ward
Ice Ward
total cost: 37.500 gil
200 x 3 = 600 gil
200 x 3 = 600 gil
100 x 3 = 300 gil
1000 x 3 rank x 3 weapons/armor x 4 abilities = 36.000 gil
Name: Faust Einz
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Race: Human
Job: Black Mage
Rank: 1
Allegiance: Schwartzvard
Station: Dark Arts General
Biography: Came from a middle-class family, he was born with a ken intuition. He tried entering the Mystical Arts Academy (a.k.a. Magical Training Facility) and got accepted right away. He topped his class becoming the youngest black mage to have ever graduated MAA.
Physical Description: (see attachment)
Personality Description: Quiet, calm, anti-social, spends most of his time reading and researching.
Skills:
Fire 1
Thunder 1
Blizzard 1
OOC: I'm gonna add equipment to my PC if that's OK
Equipment for Hugo:
Hammer: (Rank 1?; 2100)
Inc. Strength I
Inc. Strength II
Chain Mail: (Rank 3?; 4300)
Inc. Defense I
Inc. Defense II
Inc. Vitality I
Inc. Vitality II
Buckler: (Rank 2?; 3200)
Wind Ward
Earth Ward
Initiative
Don't forget to pay for the gear.
Well, here's the update of my PC and NPCs. Their combined cost will be deducted from my funds in the Osginim thread.
Name: Zacharias Payne von Ouch
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Race: Hume
Job: Mediator
Rank: V
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Duke of Osginim
Biography: Zacharias von Ouch was born in the far northern land of Osginim. As is tradition for members of the von Ouch family, he assumed a false history and traveled to Rengoria to learn the ways of the world by serving as Grand Vizier. Experienced in the ways of politics, he returned to Osginim upon his father’s death to assume Dukedom.
Physical Description: von Ouch stands at a proud 6’2” (although he’s loathe to admit that he’s still two inches shorter than his father) and is slightly underweight for his height. He has short brown hair and brown eyes.
Personality Description: After learning the news of his father’s unfortunate (although not altogether unexpected) death, he returned to Osginim to assume the Dukedom. Despite the persona he exuded in the past, he is a careful and calculating individual.
Skills:
Praise III
Preach III
Threaten III
Solution III
Equipment:
Duke’s Tabard V (Increased Vitality IV, Increased Defense IV, Increased Energy IV, Quick Reflexes)
Duke’s Chapeau V (Increased Vitality IV, Increased Defense IV, Increased Energy IV,)
Pistol V (Sensor, Increased Strength IV, Piercing, Poisontouch)
Sub-total: 47,500
Name: Ezekiel (Zed) Ake von Ouch
Gender: Male
Age: 39
Race: Hume
Job: Dark Knight
Rank: III
Allegiance: Rengoria
Station: Personal Bodyguard to Duke von Ouch
Biography: The eldest son of House von Ouch, Zed returned to Rengoria from his travels when he learned of the assault against his younger brother. He continues to accompany Zacharias as his bodyguard in Osginim.
Physical Description: A behemoth among men, Zed stands at an imposing six feet six inches. His intimidating appearance serves him well as a warrior but impeded his effectiveness as a peaceful diplomat, which is why he passed his claim of heir to House von Ouch to his younger brother, Zacharias.
Personality Description: Zed is fiercely loyal to his family, which was why he stepped down as heir in favor of his younger brother. He’s most often a clam individual, but is known to have temper tantrums.
Skills:
Dark Wave III
Over-sized Weapon Fighting III (Fighter Racial Class)
Two-handed Weapon Mastery III
Equipment:
Adamantine Plate Mail Armor III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Adamantine Helmet III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II, Initiative)
Adamantine Great Axe III (Sensor, Increased Strength II, Increased Magic II)
Cost: 29,800 gil
Name: Zoe Agoni von Ouch
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Race: Hume
Job: Chemist
Rank: III
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Personal Assistant to Duke von Ouch
Biography: The younger sister of Zacharias Pain von Ouch who traveled to the capitol of Rengoria when she learned of the attack on his brother’s life. She serves as Duke Zacharias’s personal assistant to act in her stead.
Physical Description: Often confused as a fraternal twin to Zacharias, as they look very similar.
Personality Description: A kindly young girl who at first appears rather naïve, but possesses the same sort of hidden cunning as her elder brother.
Skills:
Craft III
Throw Item II
Mix II
Ranged Mastery II
Equipment:
Chemist’s Coat III (Increased Vitality II, Increased Defense II, Initiative)
Chemist’s Goggles III (Increased Vitality II, Increased Defense II)
Revolver III (Sensor, Increased Strength II)
Cost: 19,900 gil
Name: Zell Tormen von Ouch
Gender: Male
Age: 58
Race: Hume
Job: Fighter
Rank: III
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Grand General
Biography: The younger brother of the late Duke von Ouch. Much like Zed, instead of pursuing a political career, he committed himself to Osginim’s military. He has since risen to the station of Grand General, and serves as the leader of the military under the Duke.
Physical Description: An aging man not without impressive strength. Tall and graying, he’s beginning to show signs of his age but is no less formidable.
Personality Description: He’s aggressive and brutal in battle, and his combative nature carries over into his every day attitude as well.
Skills:
Over-sized Weapon Fighting III
Two-handed Weapon Mastery III
Versatile Style I
Quick Draw I
Weapon Style Mastery I
Equipment:
Adamantine Plate Mail Armor III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Adamantine Helmet III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Adamantine Buckler (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II, Initiative)
Adamantine Sword (Sensor, Increased Strength II, Increased Magic II)
Adamantine Polearm III (Sensor, Increased Strength II, Increased Magic II)
Adamantine Great Sword III (Sensor, Increased Strength II, Increased Magic II)
Adamantine Great Axe III (Sensor, Increased Strength II, Increased Magic II)
Cost: 52,000
Name: Jon Edel
Gender: Male
Age: 47
Race: Hume
Job: Paladin
Rank: III
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Personal Bodyguard to Duke von Ouch
Biography: A well-respected knight in the service of House von Ouch, hired by the Rengorian government to protect Grand Vizier von Ouch after the attempt on his life. He has since returned to Osginim to continue to serve Zacharias--the Duke of Osginim.
Physical Description: A burly man, his head shaved due to unflattering balding with a salt-and-pepper flecked beard.
Personality Description: Takes his charges seriously, putting their lives before his own. He is often hard to approach and his obsession with his duty may put others off.
Skills:
Cover III
Cure I
Weapon and Shield Mastery II
Stasis Sword III
Equipment:
Adamantine Plate Mail Armor III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Adamantine Helmet III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II, Initiative)
Adamantine Tower Shield III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Adamantine Sword III (Sensor, Increased Strength II, Increased Magic II)
Cost: 40,800 gil
Name: Maximilian Todur
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Race: Hume
Job: Time Mage
Rank: III
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Duke’s Right Hand
Biography: Zacharias’s childhood friend. After Zacharias left for Rengoria, Maximilian began to train in the ways of the time mage. Now that Zacharias has returned, he trusts Maximilian as one of his closest advisors and friends.
Physical Description: Maximilian is dashingly handsome and considered the most eligible bachelor in Osginim, much to Zacharias’s dismay.
Personality Description: He tends to be more whimsical than Zacharias, but he can stop and put his mind to his work when necessary.
Skills:
Haste III
Slow III
Warp III
Equipment:
Leather Tunic III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II, Initiative)
Leather Cap III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Mage’s Staff III (Sensor, Increased Magic II)
Cost: 25,900
Name: Evelyn Auld
Gender: Female
Age: 35
Race: Hume
Job: Red Mage
Rank: III
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Ambassador
Biography: A skilled mage, Evelyn grew up serving the von Ouch family. Her dedication was recognized and she was introduced to the political system of the von Ouch family. She has since become an ambassador.
Physical Description: Vibrant red hair matches the traditional garb of red mages.
Personality Description: A generally mild individual, Evelyn treats others with sometimes cold fairness while still maintaining a positive aura, making her a perfect candidate for ambassadorship.
Skills:
Cure II
Protect II
Shell II
Fire I
Blizzard I
Thunder I
Equipment:
Warlock’s Tabard III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II, Initiative)
Warlock’s Chapeau III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Warlock’s Buckler (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Warlock’s Rapier (Sensor, Increased Strength, Increased Magic II)
Cost: 37,900
Name: William Bragg
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Race: Hume
Job: Red Mage
Rank: III
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Ambassador
Biography: A skilled mage, William grew up serving the von Ouch family. His dedication was recognized and he was introduced to the political system of the von Ouch family. He has since become an ambassador.
Physical Description: Green eyes and black hair offset by the bright red of the traditional red mage garb.
Personality Description: William has a disposition towards chaos. As such, he’s usually sent to aid in disputes involving war rather than preventing it.
Skills:
Fire II
Blizzard II
Thunder II
Water II
Aero II
Quake II
Equipment:
Warlock’s Tabard III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II, Initiative)
Warlock’s Chapeau III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Warlock’s Buckler (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Warlock’s Rapier (Sensor, Increased Strength, Increased Magic II)
Cost: 37,900
Name: Jay Redding
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Race: Hume
Job: Red Mage
Rank: III
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Ambassador
Biography: A skilled mage, Jay grew up serving the von Ouch family. His dedication was recognized and he was introduced to the political system of the von Ouch family. He has since become an ambassador.
Physical Description: Blue eyes and blonde hair offset by the bright red of the traditional red mage garb.
Personality Description: Jay has a calmer demeanor than most, and is usually one of the first ambassadors used to solve a dispute.
Skills:
Cure II
Protect II
Shell II
Fire I
Blizzard I
Thunder I
Equipment:
Warlock’s Tabard III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II, Initiative)
Warlock’s Chapeau III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Warlock’s Buckler (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Warlock’s Rapier (Sensor, Increased Strength, Increased Magic II)
Cost: 37,900
Name: Gwen Edel
Gender: Female
Age: 30
Race: Hume
Job: Red Mage
Rank: III
Allegiance: Osginim
Station: Ambassador
Biography: A skilled mage, Gwen grew up serving the von Ouch family. Her dedication was recognized and she was introduced to the political system of the von Ouch family. She has since become an ambassador.
Physical Description: Brown eyes and hair offset by the bright red of the traditional red mage garb.
Personality Description: Gwen is the least experienced of the ambassadors, but not by much. She has more military training than the others as she is the younger sister of the famed knight, Jon Edel.
Skills:
Fire II
Blizzard II
Thunder II
Water II
Aero II
Quake II
Equipment:
Warlock’s Tabard III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II, Initiative)
Warlock’s Chapeau III (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Warlock’s Buckler (Increased Defense II, Increased Vitality II, Increased Energy II)
Warlock’s Rapier (Sensor, Increased Strength, Increased Magic II)
Cost: 37,900
Total Cost: 367,500