lynxie, the one posted above is the final version:]
It was all gonna be cel-style ish, but then I realized it wouldn't emphasize the right places if I tried that xD so she came out like this.
I don't like the way the top right corner works together either. It was intended to help balance it out, but it didn't work so well xD In retrospect, I probably should've left the corner heart out-- it detracts from the spiral feeling I wanted.
I appreciate your intense comments, lynxie;)
