Not sure if making 'Eyes on' white made it any better.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...k2/ProtoF3.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...k2/ProtoF4.png
'Eyes on' been darkened and given a glow. *shrugs* Maybe this is better.
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Not sure if making 'Eyes on' white made it any better.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...k2/ProtoF3.png
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...k2/ProtoF4.png
'Eyes on' been darkened and given a glow. *shrugs* Maybe this is better.
If you're gonna do that, put a drop shadow on the white text or a black outer glow to give it more definition.
I don't know if I'm seeing things Proto, but in all of your roman numberal, the 'X' seems shorter than the rest of the letters.
I never really noticed till now. I did a further inspection and seems that X and Y are a few pixels shorter than the other letters. Don't have any explanations as to why that's the case. I don't think it's a major concern.
Personally, my favorite so far is Arrianna's Vivi banner.
Personally, I think Arriana's banner with the villains was the best. Mulley's right though. You need to darken Sephiroth a bit.
This one is my favorite of all the current banners. :love: It's so dreamy.Quote:
Originally Posted by Azar
Here's the third one I'm working on.
http://ladybarronmore.googlepages.com/Arrianna_B3.jpg
...and I darkened Sephiroth on demand, again, but I refuse to make him any darker. ;)
http://ladybarronmore.googlepages.com/Arrianna_C2.jpg
@ Agent Proto: It's not the color of the "Eyes on" that needs to be white it's the glow you have behind your lettering. You seem to have used the default glow which is a light yellow and it's clashing with the rest of the image. BTW, I love the idea.
Wow, Gooey that one is awesome.
Gooey, yours is my favourite, but I think you could find a better eye to place in Vivi's hand, one that draws you in more, or something? :jess:
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/8...wborderzl9.jpg
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/6994/banwogz8.jpg
I made it darker, tried to make the text less blue and added a border on one. Better or worse? :jess:
I love your's gooey, but I think the eye needs to mesh a little better with the hand. It looks a little awkward as it is right now. But otherwise, I like it a lot. :)
I don't really like the Terra sprite in the corner.
That can be removed, I just added it because the empty space bothered me.Quote:
Originally Posted by Yamaneko
I prefer this one but it would probably look better if your script was a little bulkier and the glow was smaller. Maybe by moving the stroke to the outside or eliminating it. (Also as I mentioned earlier you might want to adjust the yellow glow behind your script & numerals to white.)Quote:
Originally Posted by Agent Proto
I love it. The eye in the center needs more contrast. I also agree with Yamaneko, the sprite is unecessary.Quote:
Originally Posted by GooeyToast
Thanks for the comments everyone. Here is a draft without the sprite, and with a different eye:
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b1...nernew5fin.jpg