im maken a ffx story any suggestions

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wel screw you buddy
lil slugger is coming for you

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What? Eiko Guy was giving you advice. He was saying that your shadow character should be like:

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i dont help you cuz i like you i do it cuzz youre in my way

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yeah we had a talk about that i kind of mis under stood him heh heh

( chapter 4 a celabration )
crouds of peaple surrounded yuna as she and her guardians arose out of the a light from sins dieing body. lady yuna howed you do it one said. tenorrok stood afar with a shocked look on his face. what you jus and they thank what? miloya yelled. they want the summoner yuna to be the high one but i wont have that. jinnzo glided past the croud and sraight for yuna. two of her guadians kimahri ronso and wakka jumpped in his way kimahri's spear was forced into jinnzo's side and wakka bashed him over the head with a blitz ball. jinnzo placed his hand into his robe and pulled out his cactar friend. lulu yuna's black mage guardian new what he was doing she then took a plush moogle into her hands. jinnzo held the cactar in front of him self and yelled omega. a ball of colered light surrounded the whole city of beville. lulu held her moogle inthe air and befor she could cast a spell auron stepped forward. his sword began to glow and pyre flies filled the sky. an aeon still lives therefor sin can return one day yuna take care of your self and any one that needs you. sir auron! yuna cooed. yunie lets go. said rikku. a blinding light shined off aurons blade and onto jinnzo as he was useing himself as a sheild for the cactar. every thang went bright and vanished...................two years later.......................... yuna after suposible killing sin was now a shere hunter and traveled as one of the gullwings. the pilot of there airship was buddy, the gullwings leader was rikku's older brother "brother", and the know it all tagalong was a kid named shinra, and then there was the field patrol yuna, rikku, and paine. brother,buddy,shinra. and rikku are all albhed. after years of traveling spira they came into combat with the colosus machina vegnagun......................lets get back to the story now that you know the rest of what happened.................

i ike chapter 4 its actioney

(chapter 5 teaming darkness)
Kora flew down onto a fallen tree in the machalania woods. what is it that you summon us here forbringer? wrath asked flipping a coin into the air. yes i to wonder after all why else would you bring me back from death. a blue haired man said. because i see a great land a land of machina the land medgar, and there we find the ultimate prophet the great one winged angel. kora preached. but why me an ex maester of yeven after all dont you hate us holy slobs. the blue haired man said in a harsh voice. yes seymour you are the fourth, i am the second, and wrath over there is the third, and the angel is the first so we must find him. but how do we? wrath asked. iv found some help floating in the farplane. kora laughed pointing at the woods then tha man with white hair dressed in a full body suit if black leather walked forward. azul old friend. kora said hugging the man. befor we depart you must know of a great thret we will face. azul murmered he then muddered the words big brother cloud, mother is very displeased with him so perpare for distruction. so jinova is still living but i thought the purifying rain wait it didn't kill her thats amazing. kora cheered. not if i can say any thang about it. a man said walking out from behind a tree. who are you and why do you seek us? kora said reaching for his blade. damn some forbringer you are you cant even see who i am. the man shrugged. then he removed the hood that covered his face. my name is reno and this is rude he said pointing to a black man behind him. what wierd cloths you have. seymour said pulling a staff from his back. how bout it reno do we beat em or do we kill em? rude asked putting a steel cuff on his right hand. this morons maken fun of my threds and hes in his pajamas so lets kill em. reno barked fitting his pole taiser into his hands.

(chapter 6 turks for dirt)
Azul spun around and kicked rude back six feet. wrath shot at reno like a mad man wile kora sat on a tree stump and watched as seymour casted rire spells at them. reno then met the butt of wrath's rifle and fell down next too his partner. the three prophets stood over them staring with hate. what do we do with them? seymour asked praparing another fire spell. lets have azul deside after all they are from his world. kora smirked moving out of his way. azul took a small green sphere and pushed it into his arm aimed it at the two men and yelled bolt 3 as ten thousand bolts ran through reno and rude's bodys. a young girl hid in the tree tops above watching them carfuly. so thats were my materia gone. she thought to herself. tell me why were they following you? wrath said puzzeled. they are the turks agroup of spys from medgar they work for rufus shinra the man that tryed to kill poor old mother. azul cooed.........................gullwings airship................hay yuna im getting sphere waves from machalania but its not realy a sphere ar all its more a distress signal. buddy yelled. FRYD. rikku said from behind him. lets go see then. paine sujested. okay we will go see this sigynal. brother complained. fine here we go then buddy took the ship to the woods and docked. bout time iv been waiting. the girl said meeting yuna,rikku, and paine on the ground. so you yuna? she asked. yeah why. yuna shrugged. names yuffie im a materia hunter from the island wutai and wel i need to take you to the to city medgar or millions will die. yuffie wimpered. sure we'll help but how do we get there? rikku asked. my friend cid has an airship we can use. wait my pop is lending you his ship? rikku shouted. huh cid has no kids. yuffie said back. of corse i got kids. said rikku's dad sneaking up on them. HAY your not cid. yuffie jumpped into the air and onto cid pushing him onto the ground and putting a gient shuruken to his throte. some body get this crazy bitch off me now. cid growned. yuffie what the hell. a man said walking forward. Cid its you. yuffie screemed. this guy says hes you. she screemed agean. wel yeah theres a cid in this world too. Cid said helping cid up off the ground.

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