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The dinosaur is a dragon? Let's see......an eye, a spinal spike,a hand, a leg and a big pool of blood.
Good job.;)
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I was wondering... could you post these in thumbnails? Its kind of hard to read things when all these huge pictures are loading.
Nice work though. :)
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hey thanx and leave my crappily draw dragon/dinos alone XDDDDD i draw dragons really good actually but im too lazy to y'know...and i always got introuble for posting my comics asthumbnails x.x people always threw fits and it takes me and hour and a half to upload them on here...im sorry :(
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A dragon pet!!!. I like it so far... really can't wait for the next chapter. :D
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WOO go reeno >=D you failed aand your comic failed i hate you ^^ <3333333
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Heh, never saw the othwer comics in here before, mainly because im using a better connection where I am..
I dont understand my character at all :/
The yawn part is perfect though, totally me xD
The hot name comment :eep: There should have been a response to it, like a bemused glare or something
Also I find it hard to determine which panel leads to the next..
Its ok, but it would get higher marks from me if I knew what was going on..
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err sorry reine mm im working on the pannles ill soon be seperating them cause ive been practicing and soon you shall know whats goin on i promice
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GOOD JOB REENO YOU ROCK MY CHECKERED SOCKS I DONT OWN!!!!
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ok curious question does anyone read this anymore?it seems only me and yuffie are posting nopw days i kinda need to know so i dont waste my time posting
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Hee hee ^-^ Reeno's the popular girl :p If I didn't suck at drawing i'd lurk around the artist forums more~
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If you don't mind, a couple of suggestions;
Don't be afraid to use as much room as you need. It seems like you want to cram as many little panels in as possible, and it makes it very difficult to read. Most comics don't go over ten panels per page, many mangas don't go much over six. Give your characters some room to breathe; plus, if your panels are bigger, you can fit more text into each one, and they'll be easier to fit. If you don't want to draw each talking character, there are standard ways to signify that someone off the focus is speaking.
Also, something that will *really* help your readability, maybe letting you keep more readers is inking. Pencil scans are really hard to read, and they're not professional looking at all. Even if you just do this for fun, it's fun to pretend to be professional, so look into it:] You don't have to go out and buy fancy copic markers, but dont' use a plain simple bic pen. Find one that's got a good black tone (the cheap pens tend to be a shiny red or purple). If you see a pen lying on the floor, test it. The best pens I've ever come across as far as color texture have been free. One of them was even drug out of the the trash!
It takes a while, but it will definitely be worth it:)
