Ah, gotcha. I jusyt didn't get it at first but now that I look back I understand you. Graci for the explanation
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Ah, gotcha. I jusyt didn't get it at first but now that I look back I understand you. Graci for the explanation
No big.
Now for the rest of the cast. I fear my Characters are the only ones who had real NPC relations...
Sorry, soteg (that's ghettos backwards), but I don't think I've been online since Christmas. Wasn't it Jez who had a short relationship with Elena? He could be hers.
Sadly, I only managed to create one character, and that was Rion, and he had Rine, so Guess, you're not the only one.
Uh, Tyr's, I guess could be his brother (the one from Xerxes, can't remember which one). It's either Mordicant or Mordi...somethin'.
That's good.
Well, I'm just thinking that after that, we kinda already got the character's individual side quests. I think there should just be one extra dungeon part, last battles, then make up an ending. That's just my opinion mind.
EDIT: Why not me eh? :D
The party comes to a room, but beyond the room is simply dessert land. In the middle of the area they are in is a small oasis (healing oasis + save point).
Dax: Sand Sand, everwhere... and not a grain to err... hmm...
Barry: Well, we have as much chance of reaching somewhere, whatever direction we take. I say we go east!!
Barry walks off to the east... a few seconds laster, he re-appears to the west of the screen.
Barry: What the...!! How'd that happen?
Dax: Seems it is easier to get lost in this place then we could expect, we'll need to make sure we go in the right direction.
There's 5 screens, each one has only one direction in which to appear on the next screen, else they end up at the oasis again. After some time, they find a ruin...
Dax: What is this place...?
Erin: Dax... look!!
Dax: That sign...
Dax picks up a tattered flag, on it is the Norse symbol.
Dax: This is Norse castle... it's destoryed!
Kathy: Remember Dax, this is an illusion created by Incubus and Apocalypse.
Dax: Right... let's go inside and look around.
Inside the castle is completly empty, and the party fights Ghosts of Norse. Eventually they reach King Norse's Chamber.
Inside the throne is intact, sitting on it is a man wearing a crown and the king's red robe.
King: Aha... Dax, it has been too long since we met.
Dax: King Norse?!
Kathy: No, he is clearly not Norse.
King: Heh, excellent, excellent. I may not be King by blood, but by destroying this castle, I have become the ruler!
Dax: What is the point of these images?!
King: In the real world, I failed, Norse castle was saved. But in this world, created by the one true God, I forever am the Victor, to rule over the dead killed by my own hands!
Kathy: You...!!
The figure throws away the robe, and reveals his black skeletal body...
Dax: My god... I forgot about you!!!
Ziegfried: Heh, of course you did, you forgot the Failure, the one who lost to your pathetic army of matchstick men with his army of Elite Demon Hybrids!! Well, in this world, I am the almighty victor, the ruler! Ha Ha Ha!
Dax: What good is a world of illusion? you don't rule here, you just rule an image, a picture of your innermost desire!
Ziegfried: Oh, but you are mistaken. Not only is this my desire, it is my reality. And here, my powers are ten fold! I have defeated countless mortal men here! It maybe an illusion, but you are here within my illusion, and my power here is as much real as in reality! Ha! Your bones will crack in my bare fist! And your flesh shall be cut my the sacred Yggdrasil Sword!!
Dax: But... Tovart's Sword?!
Ziegfried: He has the Ragnarok now, This is only the second greatest Weapon ever forged now. But the second greatest weapon is MORE than enough to defeat trash like you. Heh... Let us Engaged in battle, Dax.
~~Boss Music~~
Ziegfried - VERY vulnerable to Holy magic
His Physical attacks do major shadow damage, and his sword attacks cause either Blind or Silence, depending on whether STR or INT is highest (hence Kathy would resort to physical, and Dax probably resort to his crappy spells).
~~Once he falls~~
Ziegfried: No... I failed even here?! I can't... I am... the victor!!
Dax: Even in your heart, you knew you couldn't win. Hence why you lost, in your own reality.
Ziegfried: Heh... *coughs up blood* I see now, why I always... loose...
The screen shakes as the castle starts crumbling.
Ziegfried: Here, Dax... Take... this orb... it is what created this world... focus your energy... and... you can be... anywhere you want to be... use it to reach Incubus...
Ziegfried collapses on the ground, forcing the Yggdrasil blade to crack into two.
Barry: Dax! We gotta get the hell out of here!
They sight a door next to the throne.
Dax: That door wasnt there before... quick, let's head on!
So they leave the castle, which collapses.
When they leave they appear in a long and large hallway much like a cathedral. when they turn around the door is gone and they are stuck where they are. There is a save point next to them where they can save and heal or whatever. Slowly they begin to walk down the long, dark hallway that is barely lit by small candles on the walls. At the end of the hallway there are two doors right next to each other and both of them have arrows pointing to each other. It is up to the party which door they want to open. If they choose the right one the enter a long hallway nearly identical to the one they just came out of except ther is a door to their left and a door to their front the door to their front leads them to Incubus. If in the first hallway they chose to enter the left onethen they enter a large circular room with a large white orb in the middle of it. They can see white streams of energy circulate around and through the orb.
Dax: What's this?
Tyr: (Huh? No, this can't be. He is already dead).
Kathy: It's evil, I feel it within.
The orb then turns pure white, blinds the party and explodes. The room is completely dark and nobody can see their hand in front of their face. Then torches around the room slowly light up to a dim blue glow and every body sees a huge figure standing in front of them. A deep low laugh echoes in the room and it sends chills down just about everybody's spine. Then the flames shine full and bright and they see Peon in his true ultimate form. About fifty feet tall, extreamly muscular but a large gut, bald head with small spikes coming out (much like Darth Maul), and large and think eyebrow ridges. He is also black and white all over.
Peon: Heh, I've been waiting a long time for this.
Barry: How can this be? We all ready defeated you multiple times.
Erin: I thought you were gone when we fought you in your secret cave for Tyr's Dedit Mors.
Peon: What you took my sacred claw? How dare you? You shall pay dearly for this you filthy piece of scum. And no I haven't fought y'all in my cave. What is the matter with y'all? Y'all stupid or something? But anyways DIE!
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Boss: Maior Peon
Hp: 2,400,000
Mp: 320,000
Nothing really special about him except that he has an extreamly high defense, and really strong, but kinda slow.
If they did Tyr's special sidequest for his ultimate weapon then they only fight him down to 1,200,000 Hp. But if they didn't then the conversation that they have before is exactly the same except Barry and Erin don't say anything and they fight him all the way. When they get him down to 1,200,000 Hp he creates a portal and vanishes in it or to 0 Hp he catches fire and decendes into hell burning. When the battle is over they leave through a door at the far side of the room and enter the second hallway with the door to their left that leads to Incubus.
They open the door, and find a room with many beds and a save point.
Dax: This is unusual... why would Apocalypse and Incubus put these here?
Mog: I don't know Kupo, but I'm so... sleepy...
Mog flies over to one of the beds and flops onto it.
Jez: Maybe he just wishes to fight fairly, where we're at full strength.
Tyr: I doubt it. I smell a rat. Or rather, two large rats.
Mog: zzzzzz...
Dax: Looking at him is... making me..... sleeeeepy....
Dax also flops onto a bed. Within the minute, the whole party is asleep.
They awake up in a dream world. They all seem to be able to interact within the same dream. But their purpose there is unknown, until...
*Suddenly the background changes from a castle background to a decidedly more cosmic look*
Dax: Wha...?
(I know your fears....I can taste them....)
Trey: Show yourself!
(A demon appears)
Demon: Greetings. I see you have found our accomodations to your satisfaction. I hope you like them, as they will be your tomb!
Kathy: No! We refuse to go without a fight!
Demon: We'll see.
~~~FFS Boss Theme~~~
Knightmare
Weak vs. Holy
HP: 600000
MP: 999
Note: If you missed any allies in the nightmare sequence, they are behind him, out cold. Everytime he uses "Fallen One," one ally disappears.
Knightmare: Ugh....well fought. But you only got a taste of the true power of Incubus.....
I have an idea. For the FFS game, maybe for moves there could be voice bits. For example, I'd play Trey.
For the basic spells (The ones with basic, -ra, -aga) they could follow a pattern in the voice bits of Basic, Intermedia, and Omnis. For example:
Water: Aqueous Torrentia
Watera: Aqueous Torrentia Intermedia
Waterga: Aqueous Torrentia Omnis
For the rest:
Fire: Pyrus Incendia
Shadow: Umbros Diablos
Plant: Flora Arborus
Seraph: Cherubus Lucidia
Thunder: Electros Dynamo
The party enters the final room. In it is walls made of blood, and a large chair made of the bones of various demons and the like. Sitting in that chair is the dark outline of Apocalypse.
"Hmm, took your time to reach here ladies and gentlemen. A very long and tiring journey." he began. Standing to his left was Tovart, to his right Incubus.
"Reminds me of the ancient times. Back when things were good, and people actually died horrible slow bloody deaths. They used to get crucified, and carry their own crucifix for miles and miles. A long and tiring journey, to their death."
Apocalypse rises from his chair. "You are hardly worth my energy. Tovart, dispose of these fools once and for all."
~~Final Battle Theme~~
Tovart
Basic pummeling until he dies.
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Tovart: I have failed...
His body disintergrates into the atmosphere.
Apocalypse: Just as I thought. Useless to the very end. Incubus, finish them off.
Incubus: As you wish, my lord.
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Neo Incubus
Inflicts physical damage, each attached to a status effect. Has 2 times HP of Tovart.
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Incubus: They are too strong.
Apocalypse: Fine...
The music stops, and the party is transported to a weird dimension or something.
Apocalypse: The entire forces of Darkness, they are right here infront of you warriors. Me, Incubus. We are the two wholes of a yin and yang, only both sides black! Both sides darkness. Together... the universe's future is at stake!! Incubus is the vessel, but I... I am darkness itself! Come Incubus, the time is nigh!
Apocalypse becomes a shadow, and forms around Incubus. Incubus becomes completly shadow-like, and they return to physical form together as one being.
Like Apocalypse, it's entirely shadow, but it has the face of Incubus. It's dog-like, having four legs, and the Ragnarok sword still sticking out of it's head.
Apocalypse/Incubus together: We ArE tHe RaGnArOk, tHe EnD oF eXiStEnCe. YoU aRe On ThE pAtH tO dEaTh.
~~Final Boss Theme (deeper with death chimes.. and chior most likely ^_~)~~~
Ragnarok - Has instant death attack with 50% hit rate. Flare, Meteor, Shadow Wave (puts party in darkness while knocking away 75% HP).
For every 10000 damage Ragnarok recieves, the sword becomes removed from Ragnarok's head. The party will then do 0 damage to Ragnarok (the monster) but can attack Ragnarok (the sword).
While the sword is out, it will knock HP to 1 then do a pathetic attack of around 500. Once the sword recieves 10000 points of damage, it returns to Ragnarok and it's total damage accumilates (thus if you attacked Ragnarok the sword for 15,000, only 10,000 would be taken away).
His speed also doubles at 1/2 HP (and music tempo increases).
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Ragnarok: No...ThIs CaNnOt Be!!!
Dax: Your existence has come to an end.
Ragnarok emits many white holy light beams, more and more until the shadow is completly gone. Then the beams disappear, and nothing is left.
Incubus: This is not the end... I am eternal... As long as there is life and death... (that was a purpose camero of FF9 btw :P)
Dax: It's done... let's go everyone.
We follow the party out of the lair of Incubus, until they all return to the entrance to Incubus' lair. The party gather around the portal looking back into it.
Dax: Incubus... he's dead. Why is the portal still here?
Kathy: Dead... no, the god of Chaos can never die. Not so long as a part of him still exists.
Dax: A part of him? We beat him and Apocalypse!!
Kathy: You did indeed destory his great mass. But... somehow he left a small part of himself behind.
Dax: No?! He must... he must die completly, before the world can relax for once and for all.
A laugh echoes around the portal's enterance.
"The portal is weaking, pathetic fools. Soon it shall collapse completly.. before expanding to engulf the planet!! You cannot win now. I reside here."
The samurai mask appears in the vision for a second, before disappearing.
Dax: Tovart... Incubus lives inside Tovart! Erin... I'm going in alone. Just remember. I...
The portal rapidly engulfs Dax before he can finish his sentence. The entrance collapses entirely, making it impossible for the rest to reach him.
Erin: You... you what Dax? Please come back... you have to come back safely. You must finish what you had to say. She turned and put her head on Trey's chest before bursting into tears. Trey looked down at her confused, before putting his arms around her.
Trey: You come back Dax. Don't break her heart, or I'll come to hell and kill you over again, y'hear?!
Trey got no answer.
~~Shift to Dax~~
Dax: It's over Tovart.
Tovart: Yes. For you. You see, I am the mortal incarnation of Incubus. Behold!
(Tovart begins to grow into some uber-demon)
Dax (Begins to slowly back up): Oh boy......not good.
*Wait!*
Dax & Tovart: Huh?
*Gabrielle manifests*
Gabrielle: You may be the manifestation of chaos, but I have chosen this one to be the manifestation of light. Observe.
*Dax begins to glow, and grows several wings. His armor goes from white and grey to gold and silver. His sword turns into almost a mirage looking weapon (translucent, and leaves a trail)*
Dax: Let's dance.
~~Tovart's theme, maybe jazzed up a bit~~
Basically a gimmick battle. Every time Dax strikes, he yells "For so-and-so" (Trey, Kathy, etc. one of his teammates), a close up of that teammate appears appears. Each time Tovart attacks, he reduces Dax's HP to next to nothing, and it's automatically healed. After all the main characters are through, then...
Dax: You're still standing. Amazing.
Tovart: Give up! I'm far too powerful for you and your pitiful light. Hahahaha!
Dax: No. You will never defeat me.
*Dax performs Rapture*
Tovart: Ugh....I will not die....not until I take you to hell with me.
*Not gonna happen!*
Dax: That voice....Master!
Yang: No. Not the master any longer. You've surpassed me long ago. You are the master. Now go. Your friends are waiting. I can hold off the collapse of this dimension for a while, but you must hurry. Go! Now!
*Yang and Tovart begin to scuffle a bit, but Yang quickly defeats him, and Tovart instantly disintegrates. Dax begins to run*
Yang: And for god sakes, Erin loves you! If you can't tell that, than you are a bigger fool than I ever thought!
Dax: Yes mas-Yang!
~~Outside the abyss~~
~~The beginning of the end~~
Dax (Faces Trey and Erin): I've wanted to say this for a while, but I've never known how. But just hear me out. I just wanted to say...
Erin: Yes?
Dax: I love you Trey.
(OKAY, okay! I was just kidding!)
Seriously now....
Dax: Erin, I love you with all my heart.
Erin: Oh! Thank you.
Dax (Hauls Erin by the arm): Now lets go! We don't have long!
Erin: Whoa!
(The rest of the party follows as the screen fades to black)
~~Norse Castle~~
King Norse: Well heroes! You have defeated the evils of the world and saved us all! It is not much, but I would like you all to be Knighted.
Each member goes up before the king, kneels and he puts the Excalibur, Dax's fabled weapon, on each shoulder. Lastly are Dax and Erin.
King Norse: Erin! And Dax! Last, but not least. I'm afraid I cannot knight you both.
Dax: But... your majesty...
King Norse: I have a much grander job for you. That is... if you will accept it?
Dax turns to face everyone, then again at the King.
King Norse: Hades is left leaderless. We need someone to rebuild it, and make it a place of good once again. That is why you, Dax and Erin, should become King and Queen of Hades! Wise rule will being it all together! Also with Incubus gone the darkness shrouding their souls has been removed, thus they are human once again! They have agreed to no more war, and to pledge an alliance with Norse. Do you accept, Dax and Erin?
They look at each other...
Dax & Erin: Of course, Majesty.
~~Fade Out~~
~~~Trey's Ending~~~
*Trey is standing before a group of children, with Angela at his side*
Trey: You see, they key to being a Blue Mage is keen observation. You must observe everything to accurately...
Angela and Children: ...Perform a technique.
Angela: They know this....and it's very little good, with most monsters disappearing since the fall of Hades.
Trey: HADES! Jeez! That's right! The Coronation ceremony's today! Would you like to come, Angela?
Angela: You're taking your sister as a date?
Trey: Half-Sister, and not really. You helped out, and you deserve this. C'mon.
Angela: And the children...?
Trey: I suppose they can come too...so long as they promise to behave.
Kids: *muttering* Yeah, sure, etc.....
Trey: What's that?
Kids: Yeah!
Trey: Okay. Bahamut! Come to me!
*A large dragon appears, and they all climb aboard.*
~~~Kathy's Ending~~~
*Inside Ferris church. Kathy stands at an altar*
Kathy:I can't believe I was appointed the new Archbishop. And yet....it feels so hollow an honor.
*Man enters the church*
Man: Archbishop. It is time. You agreed to oversee the coronation, and wed Dax and Erin, remember.
Kathy: *with a smile* Clearly, and I've never been more nervous in my life.
Man: There is nothing to worry about, now let us be off.
Kathy: What if we encounter any bandits...?
Man: Do not fear milady. I shall protect you.
Kathy: I'm not worried about myself. i'm worried about you....
*Kathy runs out of the church.*
Man: That woman's going to be the death of me....
*Man runs after her.*
~~Mog and Wedge~~
Mog: Wait here Kupo, there's someone I want you to meet!
Wedge: Alright...
Mog enters a tree with a door and windows carved out of it. He emerged, with a pink version of himself.
Mog: Meg, meet Wedge, Wedge, this is Meg my wife.
Wedge: Wi---wife?! Since when?
Mog: Since yesterday. Us moogles only marry by sharing a Kupo nut Kupo!
Wedge: I err... see. Hello, Meg.
Meg: Kupo Kupo!
Mog: She says... Kupo Kupo, Kupo.
Wedge: What the Kupo.. err.. crap... this is confusing!
Mog: I'm taking Meg to the wedding Kupo! Oh, congratulations on becoming a general Kupo!
Wedge: I haven't accepted it yet... I don't know if I can take it... I'm no Tovart...
Mog: Right! Your heart is pure, better than Tovart's! You're the perfect Kupo to become general!
Wedge: I don't know...
Mog: Believe in yourself kupo!
Wedge: ...you're right. I'll be the best damn general the Empire ever sees!
Mog: Great! Now let's go or we'll be late!
Mog and Meg walk away holding hands, Wedge begins to follow...
Wedge: Heh, too bad Biggs... I finally outranked you.
Wedge paces off to catch up with Mog.
~~~Barry's Ending~~~
Vander: I still can't believe you're on the straight and narrow...heh.
Barry: Erm....uh...heh.
Vander: Relax. I figured one of us had to grow out of this...heh. And I'm glad it was you.
Barry: Yeah, well, I better get going. The Coronation is gonna start. Talk to ya'.
*A lightning bolt appears near Vander*
Vander: Damn you Barry!
Barry *from offscreen*: What?!
~~Josef and Cid~~
We see Josef sleeping behind a crate. Cid comes, exlcaims in shock then runs up to Josef.
Cid: @~%$^& Wake up yer lazy bum!!
Josef is shocked awake.
Josef: dfhjty... Cripes old man you scared the crap outta me!
Cid: Shut yer hole, we're almost there! The Valvados is faster than ever for worldwide travel!
Josef: Still, aren't we going to have to walk most of the way? There's not a clearing in miles of the Empire's castle!
Cid: Ah, ole Cid here figured everything out!
A slight pause.
Josef: Then...?
Cid: Well, ha ha, y'see, all we do is... well...
Josef taps his foot.
~~
We see Cid and Josef walking through the forest near Fort Hades.
Cid: Like I said, we'll walk some of the way.
Josef: You're mad...
Cid: It's okay, we still got...
Cid rumages through his pockets.
Cid: Say, where's my blasted pocket watch?!
Josef is whistling innocently.
Cid: You...!!
Josef: Crap, gotta run!
Josef runs off into the forest.
Cid: Yer little runt! Give me that back!
Cid runs off in persuit.
~~~Brittney and Cara~~~
Brittney: It must be wierd.
Cara: What?
Brittney: You lived your whole life in death, and now, suddenly....no more.
Cara: Actually, it's a relief. I mean, It was just something I did...but nothing I enjoyed. I'm so happy it's over.
Brittney: Yeah, now we can have some fun. (Starts tickling Cara)
Cara: S-stop! The c-coronation! (Brittney stops) We better get a move on.
Brittney: Alright, let's go. *Dances around Cara, as they leave*
~On an Island~
Deadpool: This is... the Ragnorak! This is the fabled demon sword we've been searching for?
Cat: Indeed it seems that way.
Deadpool pulls the sword out of the large stone, the sword emits a bright light as he holds it above his head.
Deadpool: Yes... this power, it's magnificent!
Cat: Unfortunatly... it wont be yours.
Deadpool: What?!
The sword vanishes from Deadpool's hands, and materialises in Cat's hands (a la keyblade style).
Cat: You fool. This sword is destined to have me as it's bearer! It was mine all along, enbeded into my blood. I followed you here just to claim it. And now... it is mine!
Cat raises the sword above his head, and strikes it down upon the head of Deadpool...
Deadpool incurs one damage.
Cat: Err... can I try that again?
Deadpool is hit over and over again. Eventually he incurs 50 points of damage.
Deadpool: Are you finished?
Cat: What is this?!
Gilgamesh appears outside a cave.
Gilgamesh: Yoink!
He steals the Ragnorak
Deadpool: Ha ha ha, seems it was just a cheap imitation all along!
Cat: Curses! Well, sorry about all that. Can we pretend it didn't happen?
Deadpool: We sure can Cat, we sure can! Now let's go to the coronation of the new king!
Cat: Okie!
~Meanwhile, an ominous figure watches them from a bush...~
Count Dracula: I love weddings *sniff*
He follows.
~~~Jez's Ending~~~
Jez: Dad, are you ready?
Jez's Dad: Just a sec...there. (Enters room wearing a tux.)
Jez: I still can't believe....a demon, all this time...
Jez's Dad: Neither could I....it was like being buried under sand. I could hear and see everything, but I couldn't act...I hope Brittney forgave me.
Jez: She did....I assure you. Now come on!
*Jez casts Haste, and they run out. Fast.*
~Mephisto and Flagg~
Mephisto: ...I don't understand how you become so powerful in black magic. My black skills have never became even close to your own!
Flagg: Your trouble is you speard your skills over alot of subjects, rather than try and focus on one. Though I have to admit I too am impressed, you cover almost everything, whereas I only have my black magic!
Mephisto: I do juuust enough to qualify. Then move on. Anyway, what you got planned for the coronation?
Flagg: I have a couple of tricks up my sleeve, don't you worry.
Mephisto: Any chance you could let me in on the big secret?
Flagg: Aha, a great magician never reveals his tricks for free.
Mephisto: Meaning?
Flagg: I propose we put our skills in combination, to really give everyone something to remember!
Mephisto: I'm listening...
So....who's left?
Sikito and Tyr but I'm gonna do Tyr after everybody is completed. Except Dax and Erin. Gotta Go.
~~~Sikito's Ending~~~
*In the woods*
Sikito: Okay. I'm officially lost. Maybe I should have taken a left turn....
"You get back here, dammit!"
Sikito: Huh?
Josef: Make me!
Sikito: Hoooold on here! *casts Ice, and makes a wall in front of Josef* What gives? Where's the coronation?
Josef: This way. Follow me, but make it fa-
Cid: Give me back my WATCH!
Josef: Go man, GO!
*Sikito runs*
Josef: Damn that guy. I stop, and was just about to give you that watch, and he grabbed it for himself.
Cid: WHAAAT?!
*Cid runs off*
Josef: Suckers....
*First Half*
At the coronation (I'll leave that to y'all) Tyr is kneeling on top of the clock tower a few blocks away looking over the coronation while it is going on. He can see Sikito run into the square with Josef and Cid behind him. He can see Brittney with Cara walking around looking at little knick-knacks and unimportant stuff while they are awaiting the beginning of the coronation. Jez seems lost in the midst of a crowd. Mephisto and Flagg are no where to be seen. Deadpool stands around talking with Cat and Morpheous. Count Dracula is just standing around looking in awe at the people like he is at the biggest buffet in the world. Barry is at the front of the crowd talking with Wedge and Mog. And there is also Kathy standing near Brittney and Cara, waiting patiently. It starts (y'alls part) it ends and Tyr stands up and looks 150 feet down to the street. He turns around, walks to the edge of the ledge, prays that he will be let into the glorious realm of heaven and jumps.
After y'all do the coronation and everything that happens there and so on and so forth I'll finish Tyr.
Hello, ya'll, this is my first post in here since about mid-February. Sadly, I haven't been on the internet a whole lot, but this will probably be my last post before this thing ends. I really don't get on the Internet a lot anymore (don't really know why). Well, anyway, I might as well begin the coronation ceremony, and ya'll can finish it.
~~~THE BEGINNING OF THE END~~~
All of the heroes, minus Tyr, who is viewing the ceremony from above the rooftops, are standing with the rest of a big crowd formed in Norse. They are looking proudly, as Dax stands at the front, kneeling down with the Crown of Norse in front of him. Mephisto and Flagg now enter the scene, dressed in Ceremonial Robes, with Flagg holding a long sword and Mephisto with a Staff. Now They both turn to Face the group, waiting for Erin to protrude onto the coronation ceremony.
I'm at my friend's house right now, so I have to go now, but finish it well.:D
They all wait patiently but Erin never shows up.
Flagg to Mephisto: "What's going on? Why isn't she here?"
Mephisto: "I'm not sure. I hope nothing happened to her."
Deadpool stands up and walks towards Flagg. He whispers in his ear: "I will be back. My instincts tell me that we're not the only one's waiting for Erin to show up."
Flagg: "What do you mean? Is she in trouble?"
Deadpool: "Well, that's very hard to say, but my instincts have never lead in the wrong direction."
Flagg: "Well what about that one time that you..."
Deadpool: "Now don't bring that up again. I'll be back."
CG Scene
Deadpool gets Cat from his seat and they walk out of the ceremony. Deadpool tells Cat about what he thinks is going on. Cat draws his Saber and his Claws. But unbeknownst to them, a dark being follows closely behind them. All of a sudden the being attacks. He grabs Cat and hurls him into the air and throws a dagger into his chest. Cat falls to the ground without a single breath left in his lungs. Deadpool lunges at the dark creature with both of his swords drawn. The being dodges out of the way and hits Deadpool on the back of the neck with the butt end of another dagger. Deadpool gets up and stands straight up and looks into the darkness of the eyes of his attacker. Deadpool takes off his mask revealing a bloody face and a bewildered look. The Dark Being steps into the light and it turns out to be Morpheous. Morpheous has his head tilted to the sided slightly and a severely evil, twisted smile on his face. Deadpool puts his mask back on and the CG ends.
Deadpool: “Morpheous, what are you doing this for?”
Morpheous: “I am here to stop a party.”
Deadpool: “I can’t let you do that. We have waited for this day since the day we started helping and getting pulled further and further into this mess.”
Morpheous: “’Pool, if you don’t want to end up like Cat did, I suggest that you stay out of my way. I don’t have any remorse for killing my brother.”
Deadpool: “He was your BROTHER?!?!?!?!?!?!”
Morpheous: “Yes, he was. And I killed him. I killed our father and our mother as well. Your parents weren’t all that hard to track down and slaughter either. Hahahaha!”
Deadpool: “YOU’RE THE ONE THAT KILLED MY PARENTS? Of course you are. It all adds up now. The oddly shaped daggers, the broken staff next to my father. But why?”
Morpheous: “Because they gave birth to the one that would end the Count’s rule over the dark world.”
Deadpool: “The Count?”
Anonymous Being: “Yes, the Count. I haven’t been called that for centuries.”
Morpheous: “My Liege.”
Deadpool: “You are the Count?”
Count Dracula: “Yes, I am. And you are dead. Morpheous, go get Erin for me.”
Morpheous takes off towards Erin’s room. Count Dracula lifts Deadpool off his feet and throws him in the air. As he comes down he is hit a dark ray of magic that sends him hurling back towards that ceremony. CG begins. Deadpool is flipping trying to get back to the ground with no success. He flies right into the Monument that is being presented at the ceremony. Dust and rocks fly in every which way. People run as the monument begins to fall. When the dust clears, Deadpool stands there battered and bruised with both swords at his side. He charges at Count Dracula and Boss Battle begins. CG ends. Battle can’t be won.
One word: Corny
The villain is cheesier than Seymour for **** sake!
Ive created a better story than that.
The Darkstorn Saga (As I would call it) would beat yours hands down anyday. So would my friends (Zannith as the villain)
Thank you for your opinion, that we didn't ask for, and frankly I really don't care about. If your story is better then I'm happy for you. If your friend's story is better then good for him/her.
youre in the arms of god, but youre so far from the light... tis a shame
Hey, Darkstorn. You don't come into a forum where people are working on a story and say that it sucks. You're pretty ignorant if you do. It doesn't matter how much you think the story sucks because we didn't ask for people to read it a judge it. If we wanted that then we would have entered it into a story judging. But we didn't. So don't be the judge if there is no need for one. Got it?
Damn right I'm far from the light. Actually you should see me in person, there is no light. Oh well nevermind about me.
Uhm; stay on topic you guys. Don't go turning my baby into a flamefest, or I will have to close it.
I put the logo that I made with my friend's program on my signature, but I think that in addition to my personal logo may be a little too big for the sig rules, but I really don't know.:(
He says he's gonna give me that program, so I'll be able to shrink them and make more. Those two logos were the first I've ever made, so...if a mod complains, it will me changed in a limited amount of time.
Spat's right. This baby's sacred. If you wanna scrap, take it to PM land.
*Erin descends, in very formal wear*
Erin: Enough! I'm NOT gonna have any party crashers!
*Erin grabs a bow, and pulls an arrow from her hem*
Count: Don't waste your time. I'm already dead.
Erin: Oh really....?
*Erin fires her arrow, and hits Count dead in the heart*
Count: See?
*Count slowly starts to disintegrate*
Count: Huh?!
Erin: Holy water. I had a feeling you'd show up. Now begone!
*poof*
Erin: Our monument.....it's destroyed....
Dax: It's a pity.
Trey: Hey Erin...why don't you....you know.
Erin: Huh? Oh! Right. Dryad, help me create a monument fitting of our achievements.
*A bright green flash, and Dryad flies from Erin's body. She swirls about the wreckage from the monument, and a tree begins to grow...and grow, until it is even bigger than the monument. Flowers bloom all around the tree*
Dryad: Erin, you have been very gracious to me, and I thank you for helping me regain my strength. I mow wish to say farewell, though. If you ever need me, don't hesitate to call.
Erin: Now where were we?
Kathy: Ah yes....dearly bloved we are gathered here.....
*flash forward*
Dax: ...I do.
Kathy: I now pronounce you king and queen of the Had-
Erin: No....that name is no longer fitting.
Dax: How about.....the Seraph Empire?
Kathy: Yes, that will do fine. King and Queen of the Seraph Empire. You may kiss the bride.
*Dax and Erin kiss passionately*
Brittney: NOW LET'S KICK THIS PARTY UP A NOTCH!
*Hear a record scratch, and Blink 182's All The Small Things starts to play. Cue a montage of dancing sequences....just for the hell of it.*
The End?
The coronation is over and Tyr jumps. WHen he is a fourth of the way down a white glow spreads around him and huge feathery angel wings sprout from his shoulder blades. He still falls. Then, when he gets half way down a huge hole opens up in the ground and he can see flames burning within, and people screaming as they burn and burn in the flames; then a thin figurecomes into view from within the hole, it spreads a large pair of wings and jumps out to attack Tyr. Mordicor, with large leather demon wings, engages Tyr in mid-air and wrestles him to the ground where they both dissapear into the hole. It closes up and they are never seen again.
Um, is this officially over now?
I guess so.....kind of a sad anti-climax.
Man it is sad. I'm gonna cry.
Adios compadrés *salutes and says goodnight*