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~~~Brittney and Cara~~~
Brittney: It must be wierd.
Cara: What?
Brittney: You lived your whole life in death, and now, suddenly....no more.
Cara: Actually, it's a relief. I mean, It was just something I did...but nothing I enjoyed. I'm so happy it's over.
Brittney: Yeah, now we can have some fun. (Starts tickling Cara)
Cara: S-stop! The c-coronation! (Brittney stops) We better get a move on.
Brittney: Alright, let's go. *Dances around Cara, as they leave*
~On an Island~
Deadpool: This is... the Ragnorak! This is the fabled demon sword we've been searching for?
Cat: Indeed it seems that way.
Deadpool pulls the sword out of the large stone, the sword emits a bright light as he holds it above his head.
Deadpool: Yes... this power, it's magnificent!
Cat: Unfortunatly... it wont be yours.
Deadpool: What?!
The sword vanishes from Deadpool's hands, and materialises in Cat's hands (a la keyblade style).
Cat: You fool. This sword is destined to have me as it's bearer! It was mine all along, enbeded into my blood. I followed you here just to claim it. And now... it is mine!
Cat raises the sword above his head, and strikes it down upon the head of Deadpool...
Deadpool incurs one damage.
Cat: Err... can I try that again?
Deadpool is hit over and over again. Eventually he incurs 50 points of damage.
Deadpool: Are you finished?
Cat: What is this?!
Gilgamesh appears outside a cave.
Gilgamesh: Yoink!
He steals the Ragnorak
Deadpool: Ha ha ha, seems it was just a cheap imitation all along!
Cat: Curses! Well, sorry about all that. Can we pretend it didn't happen?
Deadpool: We sure can Cat, we sure can! Now let's go to the coronation of the new king!
Cat: Okie!
~Meanwhile, an ominous figure watches them from a bush...~
Count Dracula: I love weddings *sniff*
He follows.
~~~Jez's Ending~~~
Jez: Dad, are you ready?
Jez's Dad: Just a sec...there. (Enters room wearing a tux.)
Jez: I still can't believe....a demon, all this time...
Jez's Dad: Neither could I....it was like being buried under sand. I could hear and see everything, but I couldn't act...I hope Brittney forgave me.
Jez: She did....I assure you. Now come on!
*Jez casts Haste, and they run out. Fast.*
~Mephisto and Flagg~
Mephisto: ...I don't understand how you become so powerful in black magic. My black skills have never became even close to your own!
Flagg: Your trouble is you speard your skills over alot of subjects, rather than try and focus on one. Though I have to admit I too am impressed, you cover almost everything, whereas I only have my black magic!
Mephisto: I do juuust enough to qualify. Then move on. Anyway, what you got planned for the coronation?
Flagg: I have a couple of tricks up my sleeve, don't you worry.
Mephisto: Any chance you could let me in on the big secret?
Flagg: Aha, a great magician never reveals his tricks for free.
Mephisto: Meaning?
Flagg: I propose we put our skills in combination, to really give everyone something to remember!
Mephisto: I'm listening...
So....who's left?
Sikito and Tyr but I'm gonna do Tyr after everybody is completed. Except Dax and Erin. Gotta Go.
~~~Sikito's Ending~~~
*In the woods*
Sikito: Okay. I'm officially lost. Maybe I should have taken a left turn....
"You get back here, dammit!"
Sikito: Huh?
Josef: Make me!
Sikito: Hoooold on here! *casts Ice, and makes a wall in front of Josef* What gives? Where's the coronation?
Josef: This way. Follow me, but make it fa-
Cid: Give me back my WATCH!
Josef: Go man, GO!
*Sikito runs*
Josef: Damn that guy. I stop, and was just about to give you that watch, and he grabbed it for himself.
Cid: WHAAAT?!
*Cid runs off*
Josef: Suckers....
*First Half*
At the coronation (I'll leave that to y'all) Tyr is kneeling on top of the clock tower a few blocks away looking over the coronation while it is going on. He can see Sikito run into the square with Josef and Cid behind him. He can see Brittney with Cara walking around looking at little knick-knacks and unimportant stuff while they are awaiting the beginning of the coronation. Jez seems lost in the midst of a crowd. Mephisto and Flagg are no where to be seen. Deadpool stands around talking with Cat and Morpheous. Count Dracula is just standing around looking in awe at the people like he is at the biggest buffet in the world. Barry is at the front of the crowd talking with Wedge and Mog. And there is also Kathy standing near Brittney and Cara, waiting patiently. It starts (y'alls part) it ends and Tyr stands up and looks 150 feet down to the street. He turns around, walks to the edge of the ledge, prays that he will be let into the glorious realm of heaven and jumps.
After y'all do the coronation and everything that happens there and so on and so forth I'll finish Tyr.
Hello, ya'll, this is my first post in here since about mid-February. Sadly, I haven't been on the internet a whole lot, but this will probably be my last post before this thing ends. I really don't get on the Internet a lot anymore (don't really know why). Well, anyway, I might as well begin the coronation ceremony, and ya'll can finish it.
~~~THE BEGINNING OF THE END~~~
All of the heroes, minus Tyr, who is viewing the ceremony from above the rooftops, are standing with the rest of a big crowd formed in Norse. They are looking proudly, as Dax stands at the front, kneeling down with the Crown of Norse in front of him. Mephisto and Flagg now enter the scene, dressed in Ceremonial Robes, with Flagg holding a long sword and Mephisto with a Staff. Now They both turn to Face the group, waiting for Erin to protrude onto the coronation ceremony.
I'm at my friend's house right now, so I have to go now, but finish it well.:D
They all wait patiently but Erin never shows up.
Flagg to Mephisto: "What's going on? Why isn't she here?"
Mephisto: "I'm not sure. I hope nothing happened to her."
Deadpool stands up and walks towards Flagg. He whispers in his ear: "I will be back. My instincts tell me that we're not the only one's waiting for Erin to show up."
Flagg: "What do you mean? Is she in trouble?"
Deadpool: "Well, that's very hard to say, but my instincts have never lead in the wrong direction."
Flagg: "Well what about that one time that you..."
Deadpool: "Now don't bring that up again. I'll be back."
CG Scene
Deadpool gets Cat from his seat and they walk out of the ceremony. Deadpool tells Cat about what he thinks is going on. Cat draws his Saber and his Claws. But unbeknownst to them, a dark being follows closely behind them. All of a sudden the being attacks. He grabs Cat and hurls him into the air and throws a dagger into his chest. Cat falls to the ground without a single breath left in his lungs. Deadpool lunges at the dark creature with both of his swords drawn. The being dodges out of the way and hits Deadpool on the back of the neck with the butt end of another dagger. Deadpool gets up and stands straight up and looks into the darkness of the eyes of his attacker. Deadpool takes off his mask revealing a bloody face and a bewildered look. The Dark Being steps into the light and it turns out to be Morpheous. Morpheous has his head tilted to the sided slightly and a severely evil, twisted smile on his face. Deadpool puts his mask back on and the CG ends.
Deadpool: “Morpheous, what are you doing this for?”
Morpheous: “I am here to stop a party.”
Deadpool: “I can’t let you do that. We have waited for this day since the day we started helping and getting pulled further and further into this mess.”
Morpheous: “’Pool, if you don’t want to end up like Cat did, I suggest that you stay out of my way. I don’t have any remorse for killing my brother.”
Deadpool: “He was your BROTHER?!?!?!?!?!?!”
Morpheous: “Yes, he was. And I killed him. I killed our father and our mother as well. Your parents weren’t all that hard to track down and slaughter either. Hahahaha!”
Deadpool: “YOU’RE THE ONE THAT KILLED MY PARENTS? Of course you are. It all adds up now. The oddly shaped daggers, the broken staff next to my father. But why?”
Morpheous: “Because they gave birth to the one that would end the Count’s rule over the dark world.”
Deadpool: “The Count?”
Anonymous Being: “Yes, the Count. I haven’t been called that for centuries.”
Morpheous: “My Liege.”
Deadpool: “You are the Count?”
Count Dracula: “Yes, I am. And you are dead. Morpheous, go get Erin for me.”
Morpheous takes off towards Erin’s room. Count Dracula lifts Deadpool off his feet and throws him in the air. As he comes down he is hit a dark ray of magic that sends him hurling back towards that ceremony. CG begins. Deadpool is flipping trying to get back to the ground with no success. He flies right into the Monument that is being presented at the ceremony. Dust and rocks fly in every which way. People run as the monument begins to fall. When the dust clears, Deadpool stands there battered and bruised with both swords at his side. He charges at Count Dracula and Boss Battle begins. CG ends. Battle can’t be won.
One word: Corny
The villain is cheesier than Seymour for **** sake!
Ive created a better story than that.
The Darkstorn Saga (As I would call it) would beat yours hands down anyday. So would my friends (Zannith as the villain)
Thank you for your opinion, that we didn't ask for, and frankly I really don't care about. If your story is better then I'm happy for you. If your friend's story is better then good for him/her.
youre in the arms of god, but youre so far from the light... tis a shame
Hey, Darkstorn. You don't come into a forum where people are working on a story and say that it sucks. You're pretty ignorant if you do. It doesn't matter how much you think the story sucks because we didn't ask for people to read it a judge it. If we wanted that then we would have entered it into a story judging. But we didn't. So don't be the judge if there is no need for one. Got it?
Damn right I'm far from the light. Actually you should see me in person, there is no light. Oh well nevermind about me.