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You guys are mean.
Keep on working with your story. It's a bit out there, but nothing hard work can't fix.
It is a good story for those that like crossovers of their favourite video games/cartoon characters though.
Thanks to all of you who support me. I will work on the story.
While I find it difficult to read and subsequently enjoy your story, I am glad that you are writing. The only method of improvement is to practice, and it's generally thought that writing is a bore and a waste, and when people are completely tearing you apart for their own humour repeatedly... I myself am finding it bothersome.
It was cute and funny for a bit you guys, but let him write, if even it does not make sense and the ideas seem ludicrous and absurd.
I do not like it, and I cannot possibly make much sense of it, but the only way that you will be able to improve is to write more. So write more, but do realize that it needs massive improvement.
Nothing perseverance, acceptance of valid critques, numerous if not countless revisions, and time cannot fix.
I once wrote terrible stories, but am now told, from peers, newpapers, and teachers, that I am a talented writer. I had to start from somewhere, much like you.
I say stick with it, but realize that things have to be continually changed and expect a lot of frustration and pain before you have a working story.
Some of you are way out of line in this thread. We do NOT allow the mocking of other members, and I suggest it stop IMMEDIATELY.
SuperMillionaire has the information he needs now, and the rest of y'all are acting like asses. I'm going to go ahead and close this, to partly to spare SuperMillionaire's feelings from you jerks, and partly so you jerks can stop having fun at the expense of another person.
Really I feel like there are several of you in this thread who deserve warnings, especially those of you who have made reputations on abusing other members.
And as far as his ideas about superhero crossovers into real life disasters go, it isn't that farfetched. Marvel and DC Comics both did 9/11 themed comics in late 2001 and early 2002.
I'm linking this thread to the staff forum, and from there I hope we decide how to deal with some of you.