If you liked it then I could possibly do some of the other characters as well. That is, if you'll give me some more details, then ,,Barry has black hair. He is a black mage". :p
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If you liked it then I could possibly do some of the other characters as well. That is, if you'll give me some more details, then ,,Barry has black hair. He is a black mage". :p
Okay then, why not try Xiang (The Master)? I had a go but it came out...less than I expected!
Anyway, he's old looking, rugged (but not a beard, more like stubble), bald on top with hair going down the back (longish hair). Anout 5'9" or so, not massivly tall. Wears robes, maybe some old rings or something. And he has a wicked looking sword (The Ragnarok none the less!)! Thing you can do that?
BTW love your Barry pic!
~~Catacombs~~
Dax:Yes, let us return to Gabriel.
~~Back in the Church~~
Gabriel:Excellent, you have proven your worth humans.You truly are the chosen ones!
Dax:Great! So what do you want from us this time?
Gabriel:I sense the power of Atma is not yet fully extinguished!
Dax:Tovart's Aikido?
Gabriel:Yes. I cannot sense it's location, which means it is not on this earth. Earth is where I was given life, but anywhere else and I cannot use my power, or even go there!
Dax:But what is so special about Atma? We killed it with ease!
Gabriel:Atma's power is usless to himself, merly a quick defensive aid. But to those who can extract it....
Kathy:This is bad, how can we reach it if it isn't on this earth, let alone kill it again!
Gabriel:Killing Atma again is impossible, it is dead.
Dax:Then...
Garbriel:Tovart probably wanted you to kill it, that would explain why he made it such a threat!
Dax:So...how can we find it?
Gabriel:I have no idea
Kathy:What?!
Gabriel:Atma could be anywhere, but it cant be somewhere that far away. Then I wouldn't be able to sense him. Therefore, it can only be one of two places...
Kathy:...one of the twin moons!
Dax:THE MOONS?!
Kathy:I think we have lost....
Dax:No-one has ever been to the moon before! We're doomed!
Gabreil:Not exactly true my children....
Gabriel: you see, Akido's origanly came from the moon.
Dax: WHAT???!!!!
Gabriel: Yes, we once lived on the moon, but the moon was dieing, we thougth we were doomed.
Barry: But... how did you survive?
Gabriel: someone from earth, a scientist, came to the moon with a spacecraft, and saved us. That spacecraft was buried in a secret place.... Protected by three ancient Akido's.
Kathy: Wich three?
Gabriel: Bahamut, Leviathan, and the Akido Angel.
Dax: What!!! THE Akido Angel???!! the one that helped us??
Trey: Bahamut?!
OOC: BUGGER BUGGER BUGGER!!!!! I had a great plot twist for the Aikido Angel (her name is Gabrielle I recall by the way). Could I possibly beg you to edit that bit Final Freak? It would be for the benefit of the story later...
What?! You have a problem with one of FINAL FREAK'S posts?! I never thought I'd see the day!!!
XD
*hides*
Hey Spatvark, why don't you post your idea about that part and let the others decide which one to use?
~~Irrelivant Side Quest~~
~~Old Castle~~
Dax:What is this place?
Member:Looks like a ruin of some sort.
Dax:Maybe we should investigate!
The party explore the ruin fighting the usual monsters. Items in chests are picked up and progress is made by finding buttons in the wall.
Final Room
~~Large Chair with a grim figure sitting in it~~
Hades:You want blade that instantly kills undead? You must defeat me puny mortals!
~~Boss theme~~
Hades:Weak against Holy, cure has no effect on him
Dax
Member
Member
~~Dead~~
Hades:Fine, here is the Yggdrasil blade replica. It's power is not equal to it, but against undead it is an asset!
Hades disappears
End subquest
After the death of Hades, Dax is overcome by his umm tiredness and falls to the ground.
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FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK
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Here we see a younger Dax, just 15 years old. Dax is sitting at a computer. He is in a IRC chat. Suddenyl Dax gapes in awe at his computer monitor. His face turns red, and he slowly stand up.
Dax: "What?? BANNED?? What the f**k?
I didn't even DO anything? What the hell is this all
about???"
Dax picks up the chair he was just sitting in and hurls it through the window next to him.
Dax proceeds to go outside, pick up his chair and put it back in front of the computer, and sit down.
He sends various private messages to the admins of this chat, saying things like:
'What the f**k?? I've been banned from the chat!
Unban me, or face the concequences.'
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FLASHFORWARD FLASHFORWARD FLASHFORWARD
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Dax awakens, and slowly gets to his feet...
OOC: I would do, but I want it to be a suprise, and I can't work it in just yet... I'll email my basic idea to ya, and you can see which one you prefer
Oh, btw Old-Man, just coz' you're pissed off at getting banned from chat this morning doesn't give you the right to spam this thread up
after reading Spatvark's idea:
:whoa: , i bet they never see that coming! Maybe we could combine our idea's in some sort of way?
BTW: Those pictures rock!
The one I drew is Xiang. I had never seen the Ragnarok so I could not make the sword look like it. So I just tried to make it as cool looking as possible. Mission accomplished? I sure hope so:p
Oh, and BTW, any more requests (picture requests)? Like, Wedge or something.
Hey Gudni, now that I have your e-mail, I'll try to send you MY pic of Barry, as well as my other chars (I'm a bit touchy about that....)
(Final Freak, Bahamut was supposed to be just a basic Akido. If you want a BIG dragon summon, could it possibly be Shinryuu, or Tiamat?)
Trey: Akido Angel sent us to find Bahamut. But I've heard legends that he was created long after Akidos appeared. Are you sure about this....?
Gabriel: Did I say Bahamut? I meant Shinryuu, the Dragon God. If Gabrielle sent you to find him, I fear I cannot help you find him. But you've done well as it stands. I have faith in you.
Kathy: Well, let's go find Bahamut.
~On the Airship~~
Cid: So where to now, boss.
Dax: Hmmm....where Water and Fire meet.....try Karnak volcano. It's an island volcano.
Hey Spatvark, i just figured out how to combine them! I'll PM it right away!
Hey, FF, Spatty, could y'all keep me in the loop. Not to sound paranoid, I'm just a little curious.
EDIT: Forget it. I got ahold of Spat.
Also, for all interested, I have some ideas for secret characters.
alright, Spatvark and me figured that part out! That part of the spacecraft is in it, (give me some time to
figure how it comes in the story!), so Spatvark: go ahead with your part!
Hey, didn't we forgot the skeletons in the closets for Josef and Mog? hey about that idea of secret characters, that is a great idea!
All right.....they're pretty rudimentary, but......
FIRST, the Designers!
Guess: Comes in one of 9 forms. Giga, Terra, Omega, Neo, Omni, True, Seraph, Ultima, and finally, Trance.
Giga is a Paladin.
Omni is a Mage (White, Black, Time, and some summons)
True is a Black Belt
Neo is a Ninja/Thief
Omega is a Blue Mage
Ultima is a Bard/Dancer
Seraph looks like an Angel, but he has aspects of a dragoon.
Terra is a gun totin' bad ass.
Trance is only available to those who are observant. While the rest are statues, which you approach one of to free, Trance is a crystal off to the wayside. Trance is a mimic, but has ALL magic available.
Cloud of Midgar: Dunno. Can summon Atma. Can junction to other chars.
Spatvark: Dunno
Final Freak: (If you want to. You may just want a spin off.) Dunno.
Others
Que'Ul
He is a druid. He morphs into various Were critters, the ultimate being "Forest Spirit." He also controls Terrain. To get him, you have to find several friendly critters (Yeah, I really liked FF9) Once you get all of 'em, Que'Ul appears, and joins your party.
Any other ideas?
Atma Cloud of Midgar©, juntions unto Atma to become real good and stuff! Fires balls of....Atma and....stuff....
And he r0x0rz!!
Seriously, any Aikidos he summons take twice as long to call forth, but they do twice as much damage (As Atma has trouble being un-summoned)
OOC: Well, since I'm the one making the game, I get final decisions on everything that goes in it, and I think I may just make me the most kick-ass character you've ever seen... or I might just make him a funny one...
To be honest you guys, we're already in the game, but as comedy characters only at the moment... I may change that later though...
Anyway, a bit of an update on the game, I've now got Kathy in the party and I'm currently working on the resurrection scene...
Hey, sounds like fun!
Final Freak can use the masamume, and can do meteorstorm (50% more powerful than meteo), but costs more mp than meteo.
hey, how about a programmers room or something?
OOC: Your part has already been decided upon Final Freak... you're featuring in the game as you do here in the script
eeuh, does that mean that i get sucked into the void and that kinda stuff?
Yes, yes you will.
Also, will either you or Spat post the damn conclusion already!? Y'know, the plot twisty thing I never heard about with Aikido angel -_-
*Sits on Atma Weapon and waits for some development*
aah, cr@p. i'm still paying for that hey? ah well, i deserve it. bout that part: Let Spatvark do it, cus' he can do it a better than me....
edit: but why would you put that part in the real story/game? i mean, it would be weird for someone that didn't read the thread.
I just drew a picture of Trey (based on Giga guess'es picture) and am sending it now to both Giga guess and Spatwark. Jay me, I rule!:tongue:
It's pretty good! My only complaints:
1.) He's a little too narrow through the chest. We need to find a happy medium.
2.) His tattoos. The one on the L bicep is a phoenix. I'll send the one on the R bicep. It's hard to explain.
3.) His Hair is Blond w/ Black Roots
I don't want it to sound like I'm nitpicking, though. It's really exceptional.
*feels left out*
uhh....picture? Do you not have my mail as well Gudni? It's my username followed by @hotmail.com , not to hard to figure out is it?
Either that or could Guess or Spat fwrd it plz? thx v.much
troutE! Sorry man! TOTALLY slipped my mind!
and then someone comes from the sky. It appears to be a moogle. :mog: he goes to yang and wispers in his ear. this is what the moogle told: I got an importmant message from the queen of the moogles. A guy came to us and told the queen she must give her magic stone to him. the stone of destruction. we all refused but then the strange guy summoned an old man from the sky to cast a thunder storm to our country ( moogyria ). the queen handed over the crystal to the man, suddenly a girl whit purple hair and a horn on her head came out of nothing and killed the man with an very very powerfull spell: holy
she toke the crystal and she destroyed it with a strange ring. this crystal of destruction kept all humanbeings alive. so now that it's destroyed everyone will slowly die. there is only one thing to prevent this: make another crystal of destruction. for that we need 3 ingredients: a summoners horn, a huge materia and the sword of odin.
now yang asks the moogle why the girl destroyed the crystal, who is she. and why did the man ,who was probably Barry, wanted the crystal. the moogle doesn't know that. but what he does know is where they can find the girl. in a place called madain sari. you can get the information from her. she also has the summoners horn. but if you take the horn the girl will die.
now let's head to madain sari. when they come there they see something terrible happening to the people of the madain sari
what is it?