Path of The Shadow my comic

Seems pretty good, but all I can say, is double check your spelling. :) 'young' 'trouble' I'm not being nasty, I'm just helping you improve. :)

hehehe thanx ...you guys have no idea how much my wrist hurts...hehehe (i miss my minie ruler :'( it was my best friend!)and shauna you should be my editor cause my spelling sucks and alot of times i ferget letters XD and sometimes i miss spell on purpose!XD

Oh yeah, also DON'T abbreviate. Don't do w/ it really makes it all look kinda... shoddy. ^_^;
Also, a lot of it is REALLY difficult to read, and I'm not actually too sure how to follow the whole thing. It just seems like a whole load of boxes shoved together. Maybe you should make it bigger, and a little clearer on how to follow it. ^_^? :p

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Originally Posted by Shauna

Oh yeah, also DON'T abbreviate. Don't do w/ it really makes it all look kinda... shoddy. ^_^;
Also, a lot of it is REALLY difficult to read, and I'm not actually too sure how to follow the whole thing. It just seems like a whole load of boxes shoved together. Maybe you should make it bigger, and a little clearer on how to follow it. ^_^? :p

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wow, I admit it, you are a very good editor, Shauna.:cool:

and once again, good work kid..keep going:D .

Insert Mcdonald slogan here.

yea ehehehe im workin on that and back when i made this comic which was many months ago i was always just shoving them together but now..im makin it better (im talkin bout the countinued series Path of Cerberus)

Its hard for me to read it in some areas. Its good though, nice job.

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Originally Posted by Owen Macwere

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Originally Posted by Shauna

Oh yeah, also DON'T abbreviate. Don't do w/ it really makes it all look kinda... shoddy. ^_^;
Also, a lot of it is REALLY difficult to read, and I'm not actually too sure how to follow the whole thing. It just seems like a whole load of boxes shoved together. Maybe you should make it bigger, and a little clearer on how to follow it. ^_^? :p

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wow, I admit it, you are a very good editor, Shauna.:cool:

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Uhh... thanks? ^_^;

But yeah, it seems pretty good, you just need to fix some stuff in it! :D

ill be posting more soon but i have to redoo some pages cause i will be skinned alive for it even exsisting..........

hahaha... I like this part it held so many funny things. good work Kid, keep at it.

hehe yea i love Siato hes one of my favorite characters you will see him more in the next series whenever i get this series done with..^^ o and people r starting to give me fan art :D yay i feel so loved!!!!!i havent got it yet but my friend told me she did over the phone soon as i see her ill post it (aka the person im teaching how to draw :) )
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0005-1.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...s/scan0006.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...s/scan0007.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...s/scan0008.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...omics/scan.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0001-2.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i2...scan0002-3.jpg

alright after fighting with my scanner then relizing my pics were to small and re-scanning them i can finally give you the next part >=(

i went through hell to put this on here so NO COMPLAINING!

OH YEAH!!AC TIFA METEOR DRIVE!!!:D

This was great... good work. ^^

thanks all owww(sun burn!~~)ill be leaving bright and early and i wont be back untill august and i fergot to bring me comic (im sorry i was rushed)ill post more when i return farewell fer now :'(

We will wait for your great work patiently. :(
don't be late...