My Angel!

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j1...uess/Angel.jpg

Just done today. Polite C&C please.

She's kind of rigid. It also looks like she has a very wide face. :P I like the idea of it, though.

Duly noted. I'm gonna work on shading to see if I can give the girl some depth.

Post it again when you've shaded it. I'd like to see it.

Dress+Wings = <3

The hair is nice too, but roto is right about the width of the face~

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j1...ess/angel2.jpg

I pretty much totally retooled her. Better/worse?

It's pretty different. :P That works, too. Still, there are a couple of little flaws with the measurements again. Her face is better but her right thigh looks... swollen or something. Looking close, I think it's supposed to be turned slightly and maybe bent a little. Am I right? And she has Popeye triceps XD

Other than those, though, good job.

The way you have the arms makes it evident that this angel has two elbows, try to do a gesture drawing firt and remember that the arms are the products of two straight lines that create an array of interesting verticles.

As for the second one the shoulders disturb me.

I think you're understanding of anatomy is well except for the arms, my recommendation is to pick up a women's fashion magazine or do a search on line and just practice arm positions to get a better understanding of the shapes related to them.

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Very creative, though melancholic and slightly disturbing in content.

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Originally Posted by Roto13

It's pretty different. :P That works, too. Still, there are a couple of little flaws with the measurements again. Her face is better but her right thigh looks... swollen or something. Looking close, I think it's supposed to be turned slightly and maybe bent a little. Am I right? And she has Popeye triceps XD

Other than those, though, good job.

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Actually it's poofy sleeves.

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Originally Posted by Giga Guess

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Originally Posted by Roto13

It's pretty different. :P That works, too. Still, there are a couple of little flaws with the measurements again. Her face is better but her right thigh looks... swollen or something. Looking close, I think it's supposed to be turned slightly and maybe bent a little. Am I right? And she has Popeye triceps XD

Other than those, though, good job.

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Actually it's poofy sleeves.

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Oooh. Ok. That'd be easier to make out if it was coloured or shaded. In black and white, it looks a lot like misshapen arms.

Oh, and the Right thigh looks swollen because the left one is slightly behind it.

I think the women's magazines thing may be a good idea, though. Cosmo, here I come! :p

I like it.. looks great! :D

Sephiroth?

Never really looked at it that way...

I thought the same thing about her arms that Chemical and Roto did, they looked very strange~

As for the rest, it's pretty damn good. Although I do like her outfit less than the original, it is better otherwise.

I like it. The wings are impressive, as is the expression on her motionless face. The anatamy remind's me of FFIX's character's.

BTW, nice to see a familliar EoFF face contribute to the Artist's forum. Keep it up GG. :up: