Final Fantasy III - "The Chronicles of Eureka"

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08-02-2005, 05:42 AM
Hinky the Pickle

Final Fantasy III - "The Chronicles of Eureka" (#9)

Hey all! I apolgize if this is the wrong forum (I figured it was either this or the art forum), but I'd like to share with you a new sprite comic series I will be making. If this is the wrong forum, feel free to move it.

Anyways, this comic series is called "The Chronicles of Eureka", a comedic sprite comic focusing around Final Fantasy III (NES), which I feel is the best of the 3 NES games. Anyway, "The Chronicles of Eureka" is to Final Fantasy III what 8-Bit Theater is to Final Fantasy and what "Ah, The Power of Cheese" is to Final Fantasy IV. Basically, I'm going to stay true to the events that happen in the game but all the events will happen in some funny way, with quirky character personalities. But enough talk, let's get right to it shall we?

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The first issue is mainly filler. The storyline will pick up soon, don't worry.

Anyways, C+C plz kthxbye.

Archives:

Issue 1
Issue 2
Issue 3
Issue 4
Issue 5
Issue 6
Issue 7
Issue 8
Issue 9
08-02-2005, 05:59 AM
Buster Sword Strike

To be honest I think it needs a little more criticising the game and pointing out dumb things in the game. As this is your first it's pretty good. I hope you aren't hoping for the fame that Necro achieved though.

Edit: I think it needs direct screen shots cause half (99% actually) haven't played it before.
08-02-2005, 07:08 AM
crashNUMBERS

I like!! I find it funny. But like BSS said you need a little more criticizing...
08-02-2005, 03:33 PM
Hinky the Pickle

Well, in my defense the game hasn't even actually begun yet. XD Those who have played FF3 know the game starts out in the cave, but I thought I'd have a little pre-game storyline because the game never explains why they went to the cave.
08-02-2005, 05:44 PM
UWAOOOOU

If its anything like the power of cheese Im certainly interested.
08-02-2005, 06:26 PM
Hinky the Pickle

Here's ish 2. Remember, this is still kind of pre-game stuff, so it's just character development mostly. Enjoy.

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08-02-2005, 06:37 PM
Necronopticous

You should listen to the dialogue of the Final Fantasy III - Legend of the Eternal Wind soundtrack for inspiration. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Quote:

I hope you aren't hoping for the fame that Necro achieved though.

Yeah, you know I've been having sex with like hundreds of young beautiful groupies every day and I can hardly even go out anymore without being approached in the mall or supermarket. Maybe you don't even want the fame I've gained, sometimes it can seem a bit invasive, although I am scheduled to appear on the Craig Kilborn show next week, that should be fun.
08-02-2005, 06:38 PM
abrojtm

I'm really having trouble reading Danon's text. Also, I'm not particularly fond of the font. Otherwise keep on going ;).
08-02-2005, 06:41 PM
Kawaii Ryûkishi

I don't think something needs to be original in order to be good, but the similarities to 8-Bit Theater here are pretty distracting.
08-02-2005, 09:34 PM
Kittay

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kawaii Ryûkishi

I don't think something needs to be original in order to be good, but the similarities to 8-Bit Theater here are pretty distracting.

Ditto. Still well made, however I would have created a new style instead of copying Brian Clevinger's.
08-02-2005, 09:43 PM
Flying Mullet

I would recommend keeping the sprite colors consistent when you're using the battle sprites versus the overworld sprites (i.e. red versus pink). It makes it easier to tell who's who.
08-03-2005, 01:32 AM
Hinky the Pickle

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flying Mullet

I would recommend keeping the sprite colors consistent when you're using the battle sprites versus the overworld sprites (i.e. red versus pink). It makes it easier to tell who's who.

Well, I'm basically staying true to the game which actually had two red Onion Knights. XP It'll be less confusing when they change job classes anyway, so no worries.
08-03-2005, 02:27 AM
DocFrance

I'll be frank. This is just 8-Bit Theater with slightly different characters and plot, and about a tenth of the wit. The format is the same, the jokes are the same, the backgrounds are the same, the dialogue is the same. It's not very funny, either.
08-03-2005, 06:55 PM
Hinky the Pickle

And now here's number 3. The plot is moving right along now.

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08-03-2005, 07:54 PM
Destai

*claps* the comics should be longer though if you ask me. The first 3 could have been one.
08-03-2005, 08:01 PM
Hinky the Pickle

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destai

*claps* the comics should be longer though if you ask me. The first 3 could have been one.

True. I was looking at the third one and thinking "only 6 panels"? I think I'll shrink the logo to make more room or even just get rid of if completely.
08-03-2005, 08:19 PM
Destai

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hinky the Pickle

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destai

*claps* the comics should be longer though if you ask me. The first 3 could have been one.

True. I was looking at the third one and thinking "only 6 panels"? I think I'll shrink the logo to make more room or even just get rid of if completely.

I do enjoy reading it though and Ive never played FFIII so Im interested. Please keep up the good work! (And I like Perry, Hes going places)
08-04-2005, 06:45 PM
Buster Sword Strike

That last one was great!!

And Necro I meant like everyone here knows you 'cause of power of cheese.
08-12-2005, 12:44 AM
Hinky the Pickle

What, you guys didn't think I was dead already did you? Pfft... you wish. Well, whether you like it or not the newest issue is here. Read and enjoy. Or not. It's up to you really.

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08-12-2005, 01:06 AM
crashNUMBERS

Wow!! I find this comic really funny!! You should post it in a comic web...
08-12-2005, 01:17 AM
Hinky the Pickle

Yeah, once I get this comic off the ground a little more I'll probably give it it's own site provided I can find some good hosting.
08-12-2005, 01:17 AM
crashNUMBERS

Yeah man it's kick ass...
08-12-2005, 02:12 AM
Raven Nox

Well, I didn't like the first one, but the last 3 were pretty good, even if it does seem like 8-Bit Theater, but that's not really a bad thing. XD Well, it's ok so far, and I'm sure it could get better, keep it up. =D
08-12-2005, 02:20 AM
crashNUMBERS

What do you not like about the first one?? Just a question...
08-12-2005, 02:29 AM
Raven Nox

Quote:

Originally Posted by crash26821

What do you not like about the first one?? Just a question...

eh, it's ok, but the other 3 are a lot better.
08-12-2005, 02:51 AM
crashNUMBERS

True...
08-15-2005, 11:42 PM
Hinky the Pickle

New issue! Eat it up! It's nutritious and delicious!

This also marks the end of the "introduction" so to speak, and now the game is actually going to begin.

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08-15-2005, 11:52 PM
Momiji

Although it has lots and lots of 8-Bit Theatre references, it is quite good, as FFIII is one of my favorites. Don't listen to the other people. Keep it up. ^_^
08-16-2005, 05:53 AM
Azure Chrysanthemum

The fact that it's just a blatant rip-off of Clevinger's style is something of a turn-off, I really wish you'd make it a bit more original.
08-16-2005, 06:06 AM
crashNUMBERS

I love it!!
08-16-2005, 06:48 PM
MJN SEIFER

Brillant!

But what's wron wih Frends?
08-16-2005, 07:33 PM
Hinky the Pickle

Well, I never really found Friends very funny. I saw this commercial on TV once that pissed me off. There was this fat, balding guy in a hockey jersey getting all excited in front of the TV, with his beer and his nachos close at hand. It turned out he was watching Friends instead of the hockey game. Seriously, no straight man should get that excited over an episode of Friends. For that matter, neither should a gay man. The whole point of that line was basically to emphasise the fact that Buck is a little bit confused about his gender. Because women predominantly like Friends. I know it's a little stereotypical, but hey, what are you gonna do?[/explanation]

Anywhoo, here's the newest issue, featuring blatant advertising! Wahoo!

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08-16-2005, 08:26 PM
crashNUMBERS

Lol. Keep up the good work!!
08-17-2005, 01:47 AM
Locke the Thief

These are funny! Keep em coming!
08-17-2005, 02:36 AM
Rengori

While not a total ripoff of 8BT, you came up with a unique title. The best I came up for my sprite comic was "The Adventures of Megaman X and Frost Beast". If anyone wants to read it, PM me. I no longer have a website.
08-17-2005, 04:36 AM
Butz

very funny, keep it up :D
08-17-2005, 07:32 PM
MJN SEIFER

[QUOTE=Hinky the Pickle] Seriously, no straight man should get that excited over an episode of Friends. For that matter, neither should a gay man. . I know it's a little stereotypical, but hey, what are you gonna do?[/explanation]

k. That's you're opinion ten.But I (And most people) Have concidered Frinds for all veiwrs but That's me and my Friends (Pun not intended) and we conciderall show s for all viewers My Beliefs on't allow steriotical "Labling" But I can' Tell to change your opinion nor follow my "Religion" buI just wanted o get that of my chest.

On a positive note I think the rest of your comic is Excelant and I don't hink (Like others) ou hav ippd of 8bit thy look completlydifferentand yu are orional... so keeep it up!
08-17-2005, 07:53 PM
Flying Mullet

Hey Mr. Hinky, are these kids in a pickle?
08-17-2005, 08:52 PM
Rengori

Hey wait, those sprites aren't in proportion!
08-18-2005, 08:32 PM
Hinky the Pickle

Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you... comic number the seventh.

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08-18-2005, 09:24 PM
Flying Mullet

Narf!
08-18-2005, 09:24 PM
crashNUMBERS

Nice!! :cool:
08-19-2005, 12:22 AM
Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flying Mullet

Narf!

Narf!
08-19-2005, 02:19 AM
abrojtm

Mortal.....
08-19-2005, 02:56 AM
Hinky the Pickle

Quote:

Originally Posted by abrojtm

Mortal.....

I mispelt that purposely, I'm not an idiot. It's a reference to a Flash movie I can't be bothered to remember the name of where the devil called everyone "mortels" instead of "mortals".
08-19-2005, 03:12 AM
abrojtm

OK :)
08-19-2005, 03:50 AM
Raven Nox

XD Ok... that one was hilarous.
08-19-2005, 03:53 AM
crashNUMBERS

That comic was awsome!! I've never seen such a thing!!
08-20-2005, 02:12 AM
Hinky the Pickle

You can always count on these guys to make a big deal out of fighting a turtle. Heh heh, here's number 8. I promise, the plot will actually move soon.

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08-20-2005, 02:25 AM
Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by Perry

Poopy head times two.

Oh, that's cold.
08-20-2005, 03:26 AM
crashNUMBERS

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by Perry

Poopy head times two.

Oh, that's cold.

:lol::laugh::lol::lol:
08-20-2005, 03:28 AM
Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by crash26821

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by Perry

Poopy head times two.

Oh, that's cold.

:lol::laugh::lol::lol:

"crash26821: The Chronicles of the Laughing Smilies"
08-20-2005, 03:41 AM
crashNUMBERS

:shifty:
08-20-2005, 02:00 PM
Captain Maxx Power

Quote:

Originally Posted by Behold the Void

The fact that it's just a blatant rip-off of Clevinger's style is something of a turn-off, I really wish you'd make it a bit more original.

You mean using sprites in a panel based comic? Yes, of course, Clevinger definately pioneered THAT style :rolleyes2

Seriously, not many of us could pull off a comic such as this anyway, and it's top quality. Stop being so bloody pedantic and enjoy it. I know I am ;)
08-20-2005, 05:45 PM
Azure Chrysanthemum

The earlier comics were written very much as Clevinger writes 8-Bit, although I am glad to see more original jokes have been used.
08-20-2005, 06:31 PM
Kawaii Ryûkishi

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maxx Power

Quote:

Originally Posted by Behold the Void

The fact that it's just a blatant rip-off of Clevinger's style is something of a turn-off, I really wish you'd make it a bit more original.

You mean using sprites in a panel based comic? Yes, of course, Clevinger definately pioneered THAT style :rolleyes2

The style in which the dialogue is written is entirely a clear rip-off of Clevinger's. Clevinger isn't terribly funny to begin with, but at least he has originality going for him. This comic doesn't even have that.
08-20-2005, 06:35 PM
Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kawaii Ryûkishi

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maxx Power

Quote:

Originally Posted by Behold the Void

The fact that it's just a blatant rip-off of Clevinger's style is something of a turn-off, I really wish you'd make it a bit more original.

You mean using sprites in a panel based comic? Yes, of course, Clevinger definately pioneered THAT style :rolleyes2

The style in which the dialogue is written is entirely a clear rip-off of Clevinger's. Clevinger isn't terribly funny to begin with, but at least he has originality going for him. This comic doesn't even have that.

How far did you read in 8-Bit Theater? He got much funnier around Garland's Castle.
08-20-2005, 06:40 PM
Kawaii Ryûkishi

I've read 8-Bit Theater consistently since the beginning.
08-20-2005, 07:44 PM
Chris

Do you know what? I think you've done an exceptional job. I really enjoyed reading through all of it.
08-20-2005, 08:02 PM
Azure Chrysanthemum

Quote:

I've read 8-Bit Theater consistently since the beginning.

As have I, there are definite stylistic simularities.
08-22-2005, 01:31 AM
crashNUMBERS

I love 8 bit and I think its funny and all (At times) but it can do much better...
08-29-2005, 09:43 PM
Hinky the Pickle

Finally, a new issue. Sorry about the delays, I've been busy with work and just enjoying the last of my summer. Anywhoo, here's issue 9 after a long, long wait. Thanks for being patient. :)

P.S. About the different fonts... I had to reformat my C:/ drive so the ones I was using are gone and I can't remember their names. I hope you like the new font though.

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08-29-2005, 09:59 PM
crashNUMBERS

Finally!!
08-29-2005, 10:04 PM
MushroomZOMBIE

Wasn't that "Game Set" from Super Smash Brothers? :p
08-29-2005, 10:13 PM
UWAOOOOU

Im loving this.
08-29-2005, 10:35 PM
Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evan

Im loving this.

That goes for me as well.
09-02-2005, 04:25 PM
Destai

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evan

Im loving this.

That goes for me as well.

yup
09-02-2005, 09:29 PM
crashNUMBERS

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destai

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rengori

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evan

Im loving this.

That goes for me as well.

yup

Mmhmm..

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