this thread will soon have my comic posted on here for you people but for now you may look at the cast of Path of the shadow (i promice i will get atleast some of the comics up by this weekend!)Sorry bout the last pic i was too lazy to out line him
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this thread will soon have my comic posted on here for you people but for now you may look at the cast of Path of the shadow (i promice i will get atleast some of the comics up by this weekend!)Sorry bout the last pic i was too lazy to out line him
I like the 1st one shown the best.
Nice pics. Comic you say? Would you be so kind as to enlighten us on the story.
The third one.Bend the middle part of the katana a little.Katanas are curved,not straight.Thought you ought to know.
I thought Katanas were straight edged.
Look at Sephiroth's.That's the kind of katana I'm talking about.Or look up some REAL katanas on the net and see for yourself.
Katana are not in the least bit straight-edged. The purpose of a katana was to include the power of a much longer blade in a shorter space, so while it is only 3 feet or so it still has the draw of a 4-foot blade.
Yeah... Mines curved... but I'm not agree-ing. Maybe the sword just has the handle of the katana and the blade of another sword, it's someone elses Original Character, so maybe it was meant to be like that? :D
I always assumed it was so it could be drawn from the sheath with less hassle.Quote:
Originally Posted by Behold the Void
Anyway, I look forward to seeing the comic.
srry bout that people ill fix it later what im scanning now is the first chapter of Path of the shadow and before you say anything yes the fisrt couple of chapters suck cause i thought i wasnt gonna continue it so give it a chance it will get longer
srry bout the food on the last one i dont even know what it is ewww last time i bring my comics to lunch......also as we go on i want to see who can guess what i copied off of i wanna see how well you people pay attention hehehehehe
Looks pretty good so far. Do you have a website where you're posting these or...?
I'd work on the layout. It's kinda hard to follow, an I'd suggest putting less panels on one page.
yea well these are old and like i said i thought this wasnt gonna continue so y'know im tryin to fix that right now and no i dont i dont have time to make a website to post em on there
ill get the second chapter on here soon if you care for it
They look like the cast from Samurai Champoo ...
HAHA SHE GOT IT! good job saphirestar i was waiting to see who would get it!yes thats what i copied off of (heres the reason)i wanted a guy with long hair in my comic and lets just say everytime i try to draw someone with long hair they look like women..........and samuria champloo inspired me to draw this comic tifa was based off fuu and Hittoshi was based off of jin but Cerberus came from my little head cause knowing me i have to have some sort of human/animal in my storys!
Cant believe no one else see it! I like the first and thrid image, both have been done really well.
yea me too i spent like 10mins on the middle one i hate it actually but its the only one i have of the whole cast
im currently workin on a new pic of cercerus raine and Zack ^^
okay heres the second chapter you will have to wait for the last 2 pages i could only do 4 and its because my scanners being gay
Samurai Champloo?I'm quite a samurai fan but I never heard of it.Any breifings?Please?
You mustnt be that big a fan then. Try Google, this is a different topic altogether.
samurai champloo is awesome its on adult swim mon-thurs at 1:00am its just 2 samuria and a girl travling through japan to find the samurai that smells of sunflowers its a really good show i love it
heres the last pages of ch 2 fer my comic
It's a retarded samurai show on saturdays on Adult Swim.Quote:
Originally Posted by Omnislasher Draco
awwwwwww you dont like it its one of my favorite shows though :(
I don't live in US.
awww too bad well the third chapter will be on here soon so hold on
They look kewl, chrono!!! ^^
thanx freena
Cool Pictures/comics. <3
yea i need to put the 3rd chapter on huh
Definitely.
yea well here ya go its only 3 pages but this is the turning point of me story this is where it starts to get good
mmk (runs and gets comic)ok now to scan ok this is where my comic gets good
Scan them in larger, they're hard to read.
srry cant ill try and make the words darker
Loving the heavy girl part.LOL:D
thanx ^^
hehehe they are so good and also funny i like the way u colour them they look so cartoon like...i like them ^_-, keep drawing friend
:D thanx i like it when people like my comics makes me feel loved
Those images have lots of dialogue from Pretears first episode. Techincally thats plagiarism and cheating.
so yer point?its not like there gonna go huge and sell er sumthin i just copied cause i like those shows and i just wanted to see if people liked my stile not my writing
Yeah but whats the point of using someone elses work and getting credit for it? Which techincally you are cause people have commented on the "heavy girl part." Its like your admitting you cant write your own comic, so you take dialogue from other popular works. If you want people to like your style, then just post the characters. If you want to create a full comic, make your own dialogue up. Its more honest then ripping off others.
well i only copied in the beginning thenits all make believe so y'know i needed a little help from other shows is that so wrong and ya i may have problems coming up with stuff so what
Alittle help? You may has well have written the whole series into your comic. Alittle help is the characters almost looking the same. That was alot of help. Its not hard to write a story. Anyone can do it and dont say you cant cause you can. You need to work out your begining, middle and end. Who lives and dies, falls in love, hero, villian etc. Then you tie it all together. Its not difficult.
well you know what i dont really care what you think and if you have a problem with this thread dont come here cause i dont know what your problem is do leave me alone (cant people have fun and copie off things plenty of people do it and plus i dont want people to pay that much attention to the comic i want it to be mostly the art)
Christ I offered you advice. Rip off other peoples work then, be a cheater. Like I care. Learn to take advice and be grateful you brat.
didnt sound like flippin advice to me sounded more like i was being yelled at fer copieing so what eva
Whatever yourself.
Gee, hmm. That sounded like advice to me. But it was wasted on someone like you.Quote:
Originally Posted by Me
so pretty much all your saying is to through away all 100pages i did on that re do every single character waste another 6 months to think and forget everything ive done is that it
Did I say throw stuff away? Where did I say that? Bloody nowhere. I told you the basics of storytelling:
Do what the hell you want to your comic, throw it away, burn it. Whatever the hell you want. Just remember you ripped of someone elses work. Someone who worked hard as an animator and scriptwriter.Quote:
You need to work out your begining, middle and end. Who lives and dies, falls in love, hero, villian etc. Then you tie it all together. Its not difficult.
ok could you just stop this and speak respectfully with me ok ive tried to get along with you so im srry i took your "advice" the wrong way it just sounded like i was being yelled at for doing so im tired of flipping fighting with you im srry my imagination isnt great and im srry i cant get my any good ideas out of my own head so stop fighting with me im fed up with it
:)excuse me this is my friend u r talking about and he is really annoyed and sad because u speak this way..... don't do that don't u want friends??/ i love friends though i have none but it is ok with me... it wont hurt to say nice words to other poeple to cheer them up and give them some confident..... nice to meet u :)Quote:
Originally Posted by ~SapphireStar~
just leave her alone its her comic if she wanted advice she would have asked you, and if she did she didnt want advice that is rude and sounds like u need some midol:mad2:
i didn't mean to be rude there well i don't know her much but i read her posts in other places and they r no good...... i tried to be nice to her.. well i am sorry that i care about my friend cause she is the only friend i have here:mad2:Quote:
Originally Posted by Rikku_Yuffie_girl
Nah Owen, Rikku_Yuffie_girls having her weekly spat at someone. I suggest you mind your own business RYG, its been settled and sorted. I swear you 2 PM each other to keep egging a situation on.
Not everyone is from the crappy US of A, so I havent got the foggest idea about what your spewing on about. And Owen, get your grammar sorted before you start lecturing people.Quote:
sounds like u need some midol
owen i wasnt talking about u i was talking about sapphire star, and we didnt pm, we did it on the phone as u can tell were friends and im stick up for her, and your the one who keeps on going and on we are getting ready to stop writing forums because u end up putting a snobby comment every time.
p.s midol is for women that are on there period for there crapps so im saying u need one cause your be a bitch
yes kid told me so thank u.... eh... is my grammer really bad i don't know... and rikku_yuffie_girl..... i suggest we just ignore her she'll leave when we don't give her attention 'let her talk to the wall'' and well we are both kid's friends:DQuote:
Originally Posted by Rikku_Yuffie_girl
i bet my grammers worse:)
:)hehe.... i don't know... and who cares if our grammer is not good the important thing is that we r good and that we r friends right?:)Quote:
Originally Posted by Rikku_Yuffie_girl
yuppers grammer shrammer
yep your right
Okay, all of you knock it off with the personal attacks and the spam.
Chapter 3 (the one where he gets the gold) is based off of Bogus Booty from Samurai Champloo.
EDIT: In fact, its almost completely ripped off of Samurai Champloo. I suggest you give some sort of credit to Manglobe.
trust me i do its all over my cover for the chapter(i just dont post em cause it takes to long but i promise i dont copy anything els...i think other people helped me with the rest so i give 80% orf the credit to the thing i copied off of kk?
So when will you post chapter 4?
wow you guys actually want to see mjore YAY well i fergot me folder but ill be posting some wed. so have no fear and im gonna try and make it so its easier for you people to read
And please don't steal like 60% of a Samurai Champloo episode...
dont worry i dont copie off of anything(that i know of) from this chp and on..
good job kid and it looks cool
Do you ever use ink for your comic? You know like, you draw it, rub out mistakes and then go over in black ink? IMO it stands the images out more, but its your comic :D You are doing a good job so far. Keep it up!