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well heres another one. Its been a wile since I did some drawing, but I got this book in Calgary that teaches how to draw Manga art, so I bought it in the hopes of improving. I just finished drawing a new picture so, tell me what you think... and please tell me what you think needs more work.
It looks very good - I especially like her eyes. Overall the drawing could use some more colour, though. Maybe it's the scanner that's messed it up and made them pale, who knows - but since it's manga it would be nice with eye popping colours :) Keep up the good work.
I kinda don't like the way the nose is shaded, it looks like it's a dark twinkle, other than that it's good.
she has no nose :O
but pretty eyes !
That is verrrry nice.
The drawing itself is perfect! :)
But I would say use ink instead of what you are using there, because it makes it seem amateur when it's not a solid colour. :-\
Ink is the way to go, ink is the FUTURE! :love:
I like it all I think the nose is fine. :D
Thank you all for the comments and helpful tips. It was my first real effert.(thanks and yes Alive-Man, Ink would be much better. however I'm a bit too poor to have a rainbow of ink right now)Quote:
The drawing itself is perfect!
But I would say use ink instead of what you are using there, because it makes it seem amateur when it's not a solid colour.
Ink is the way to go, ink is the FUTURE!
I'm trying some full body pics to. two are street fighters (Akuma is proving to be very hard espesialy the face) and one is just a chick I made up...there my first ones so they won't look wow or anything
Nice work...
Great work. I love the eyes.
Akuma is complete :)...(I just had to look in my Street Fighter15 anivuresery maual)
Sorry for the dubble post but I wanted to show a profile picture I made of Motoko from "Ghost in the Shell". I finaly bought some ink pens and tried it out.
PS: I know the hair is wrong :( didn't have the right colors.
that female looks damn fine.
It's very detailed and very well-drawn, and I like the way you kind of color with a top-to-bottom motion because it makes it look very smooth, in a way. It's a very nice piece :D
Thanx! :D Im looking forward to doing Lulu, Tidus, and Rikku as well.
there pretty good!well done! the only thing is that when i do pics i would press down on the c/pencil to get its ful color and not have any bits of the white page cumin through.its just to get a more solid color, it might make the pics look better.
Heres a pic of Rikku...I made the error of not drawing the skeleton first, wich made the body look off.
ya but then I end up breaking the c/pencils. :(Quote:
the only thing is that when i do pics i would press down on the c/pencil to get its ful color and not have any bits of the white page cumin through.its just to get a more solid color, it might make the pics look better.
wel dont press down too hard now,just enough to get full color.
All excellent, show us more, please, PLEASE!!!!
heres my newest pic...well its realy the start of a comic. let me know what you think :D
nice
Pages 2 and 3 of my comic plus a detailed pic of the male charater and a pic of Chi from Chobits.
helpful Critisism please :)
You proportion the facial features perfectly.
My comic is coming a little slow. dose anyone have some helpful tips for the story?