Lyric Problems

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10-07-2006, 10:49 PM
TidusMaster

Lyric Problems

I hate this kid at my school....really badly...im a singer in a band and im going to write a song about him. the only problem is...is that im no good at song writing.i will tell you about him so you can use somethings in the song.....
-he steals my friends
-he makes fun of me behind my back
-he thinks that hes all that
-his friends thinks that hes sweet,but when there not there,hes mean.
-he lies alot.
ok,that should do it,now i will be sooo greatful with whover makes these lyrics.dont worry about the tunes,i can do that.
10-07-2006, 10:51 PM
Polaris

how is his name?
what kind of music style u want it to be?

EDIT: duhh now I saw that he was a guy :( god I'm tired!
10-07-2006, 10:52 PM
Old Manus

But nobody likes emo music.
10-07-2006, 10:56 PM
Venom

Why write a song about him when you could just as easily kill him?
10-07-2006, 10:59 PM
Rye

Awww. ;_; I can really relate to you. I have a friend like that, his name is Kyon. He's always stealing my friends and my songs. He's leeching off of my creative juices! :mad2: :mad2: :mad2:

In the back of my head
Crawling in my skin
There's a voice inside
Lying within

It screams out his name
In a bout of rage
KYON YOU JERK
I'M GOING TO CALL A BLACK MAGE

TO BURN
BURN
BURN
BURN
BURN YOU OUT OF MY LIIIIFE.
10-07-2006, 11:00 PM
Anaisa

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arucard

Why write a song about him when you could just as easily kill him?

Maybe he's going to kill him with his music?
10-07-2006, 11:00 PM
Polaris

What do you think of this as the first part (still missing the chorus the second part and the last one)

He steals and he lies
I'll curse your hypocritical smile
One day everyone will see
The smurfing bastard
You never show to your friends
To them
You're the sweet angel from the skies
You're the devil that no one likes
10-07-2006, 11:02 PM
Venom

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anaisa

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arucard

Why write a song about him when you could just as easily kill him?

Maybe he's going to kill him with his music?

Oh no I meant kill him with some kind of weapon. Maybe he could use music though. But it has to be really loud.
10-07-2006, 11:05 PM
DK

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME
I DID NOTHING TO YOUUUUUU
HOW DID YOU STEAL MY FRIENDS
YOUR BREATH SMELLS LIKE POOOOOOO

UH UH UUUUUHHHH

WHY CAN'T YOU TALK TO MY FACE
WHY DO YOU ACT ALL SWEET
I WANT TO BEAT YOUR HEAD UP
AND KICK YOU WITH MY FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET AAAAAAH (you should scream this part to show your fury)

YOU'RE NOT ALL THAT
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
I BET YOUR MOM IS FAT
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU LEAVE
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
WHEN YOU'RE GONE I WON'T GRIEVE

AAAARRRRRGHHHHH
ALL YOU DO IS LIE
I ASK MYSELF WHY
DO I EVEN TRY
BUT YOU WON'T MAKE ME CRY
I WISH THAT I COULD FRY
YOU IN YOUR STUPID EYE
AND THEN YOU'D WANT TO DIE
AND IT WOULDN'T BE GOODBYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

YOU'RE NOT ALL THAT
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
I BET YOUR MOM IS FAT
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU LEAVE
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
WHEN YOU'RE GONE I WON'T GRIEVE

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
10-07-2006, 11:07 PM
Rye

Quote:

Originally Posted by DK

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME
I DID NOTHING TO YOUUUUUU
HOW DID YOU STEAL MY FRIENDS
YOUR BREATH SMELLS LIKE POOOOOOO

UH UH UUUUUHHHH

WHY CAN'T YOU TALK TO MY FACE
WHY DO YOU ACT ALL SWEET
I WANT TO BEAT YOUR HEAD UP
AND KICK YOU WITH MY FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET AAAAAAH (you should scream this part to show your fury)

YOU'RE NOT ALL THAT
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
I BET YOUR MOM IS FAT
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU LEAVE
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
WHEN YOU'RE GONE I WON'T GRIEVE

AAAARRRRRGHHHHH
ALL YOU DO IS LIE
I ASK MYSELF WHY
DO I EVEN TRY
BUT YOU WON'T MAKE ME CRY
I WISH THAT I COULD FRY
YOU IN YOUR STUPID EYE
AND THEN YOU'D WANT TO DIE
AND IT WOULDN'T BE GOODBYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

YOU'RE NOT ALL THAT
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
I BET YOUR MOM IS FAT
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU LEAVE
I HATE YOUUUUUUUU
WHEN YOU'RE GONE I WON'T GRIEVE

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

You jerk! :mad2: :mad2: :cry: You stole my song AGAIN! :mad2: :mad2: You make my blood BOIL. You make me want to scream in a storm as my tears and the rain mingle. :mad2:

GET OUT
GET OUT OF MY HOUSE
YOU CAN'T
YOU CAN'T HAVE MY LOUSE
ALL THIS TIME
I CAN'T BELIEVE IT WAS YOU
WITH MY MOM
UNDER THE COVERS
ALL THIS TIME
I CAN'T BELIEVE
YOU WERE MY MOM'S LOVER
10-07-2006, 11:09 PM
I Took the Red Pill

I know you lie alot alot alot alot,
So I think that you should be shot,
Because my friend is what you are not.

So I'm writing this song about you and how you should be shot
Don't think it's nerdy, because it's not. :mad2:

ASFHAbjakdbfjhADSFJHADRSJHARSDJH (spontaneous grunts and such)
ASDGJADLVJCdsyWEYAS
*Words that can't be posted on this forum*

TIDUSMASTER IS MY NAME,
AND TO YOU I SHALL BRING SHAME

I CUT OFF A CHICKEN'S HEAD
AND YOU ARE NEXT IN LINE MY FRIEND

STOP TALKING ABOUT ME BEHING MY GOD DAMN BACK
I BET YOUR TEETH HAVE LOTS OF PLAQUE

My rhyming scheme here really sucks,
But if you want A GOOD SONG YOU'RE [img]/xxx.gif[/img][img]/xxx.gif[/img][img]/xxx.gif[/img][img]/xxx.gif[/img] OUT OF LUCK.
10-07-2006, 11:13 PM
Polaris

He steals and he lies
I'll curse your hypocritical smile
One day everyone will see
The smurfing bastard
You never show to your friends
To them
You're the sweet angel from the skies
You're the devil that no one likes

One day you'll be alone
I hope you'll burn
Alone somewhere no one knows
Your fakeness will die with you

You lied again
You can't stop that cicle
Shoot yourself in the head
And will see no brains inside
Coz you have nothing in your mind

Wake up alone
Cry all your blood
Watch your image fading so good
This world would be a lot more cool

One day you'll be alone
I hope you'll burn
Alone somewhere no one knows
Your fakeness will die with you

Not good but whatever :(
10-07-2006, 11:32 PM
sephirothishere

im not emo and i dont listen to songs with lyrics...im into instrumental stuff...im currently into greg howe and his fusion styles suchas the album Extraction....

ill give the lyrics a go though....

Quote:

he steals my friends
-he makes fun of me behind my back
-he thinks that hes all that
-his friends thinks that hes sweet,but when there not there,hes mean.
-he lies alot.

lets see...

you steal my friends....
you laugh behind my back....
you think your all that...well..i am....
idiots think your sweet...i kick their ass aswel...
he lies alot....and looks like snot....hahahha....

well...here is somethin i prepared earlier..if taht catchy tune didnt tickle your fancy......hahaha

Start trouble, spread pain
Piss and venom, in your veins
Talk nasty, breathe fire
Smell rotten, you're a liar
Sweat liquor, breathe snot
Eat garbage, spit blood
Diseased, health hazard
Scum bag, filthy bastard
Greasy face, teeth decay
Hair matted, drunk all day
Abscessed, sunken veins
Rot gut, scrambled brain
Steal money, crash cars
Rob jewelry, hock guitars
Rot in hell, it's time you know
To your master, off you go
You're a liar

i wonder where the inspiration came from.....huh???
10-07-2006, 11:56 PM
themagicroundabout

I don't really like you
I think you are like poo
Because poo is smelly
And so are you

Get out of my life
Stop stealing my friends
I will make you wee your pants and
you will die

I am a monster AH HA HA HA HAAAA
I will eat your destiny AH HA HA HA HAAAA
Don't try and be mean to me AH HA HA HA HAAAA
Because you are not nice AH HA HA HA HAAAA

There was this one time
Do you remember?
When you were pretending to be sweet
but you weren't really; you were only pretending

stop making fun of me behind my back
or i will stab you in a brutal fashion
with my dad's presentation samurai swords
vengeance is in the air

I am a monster AH HA HA HA HAAAA
I will eat your destiny AH HA HA HA HAAAA
Don't try and be mean to me AH HA HA HA HAAAA
Because you are not nice AH HA HA HA HAAAA

*guitar solo*

I am a monster AH HA HA HA HAAAA
I will eat your destiny AH HA HA HA HAAAA
Don't try and be mean to me AH HA HA HA HAAAA
Because you are not nice AH HA HA HA HAAAA

That should about do it imo
10-08-2006, 12:01 AM
Decessus

DUNANANANANANANNANANANNANANANNNANAANNA!!!!!
YOU SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!
DUNANANANANANANNANANANNANANANNNANAANNA!!!!!
YOU STILL SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!
DUNANANANANANANNANANANNANANANNNANAANNA!!!!!
GUITAR SOLO!
*GUITAR SOLO*
DRUM SOLO!
*DRUM SOLO*
DUNANANANANANANNANANANNANANANNNANAANNA!!!!!
YOU SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!
DUNANANANANANANNANANANNANANANNNANAANNA!!!!!
BAAAAAATMAAAAAAAN!
DUNANANANANANANNANANANNANANANNNANAANNA!!!!!
YOU HAVE A STUPID HEEEEEEEAAAAAAD!
DUNANANANANANANNANANANNANANANNNANAANNA!!!!!
THE EEEEEEEEEND!
10-08-2006, 12:59 AM
TidusMaster

wow....thanks......i was looking for some SERIOUS lyrics....ever persons lyrics had poo in them...except for a few
10-08-2006, 03:07 AM
final fantasy is stinky

Why don't you just fight him/her??:love:
10-08-2006, 03:09 AM
The New Kid

I suggest having a band meeting and writing this song together. You could probably bounce ideas off each other and come up with something ownage. Try it out.
10-08-2006, 03:42 AM
Sylvie

I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!
YOU SUCK!!!!!!!
YOU DON'T GIVE A smurf!!!!!
smurf YOU!!!!!!!!!!
GOD DAMN ITTTTT!!!!!
VRANANANANANANANANANA
*BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*
I'M GOING TO KILLLLLLLLL YOU!!
YOU LYING BASTARD!!!
YOU STOLE MY FRIEND!!!
YOU STOLE MY PIE!!!
YOU STOLE MY smurfING COOKIE!!!
10-08-2006, 03:45 AM
LunarWeaver

Write a love song dedicated to his mom, not a hate song for him.

One huge your mom joke, it's full of win :monster:
10-08-2006, 03:55 AM
Christmas

HATE songs make my day.
10-08-2006, 10:05 AM
Quindiana Jones

Iiiii want you dead!
Iiiiii want you dead!
Iiiiii want you dead forever moooooore!
10-08-2006, 01:34 PM
AdVenT

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arucard

Why write a song about him when you could just as easily kill him?

Yeah but then comes in the whole legal system thing... murder and what not
10-08-2006, 01:55 PM
Alive-Cat

There is a mean boy in my school
He thinks he is too cool for school
But I know that deep down he is a fool
And he really reminds me of a fool

He is ugly
And stuff
10-08-2006, 02:11 PM
NeoCracker

Rather than make your own song, sing I hate everything about you to him. If anything the Why do I love you line will scare him to the point he'll avoid you at all costs.
10-08-2006, 02:14 PM
Levian

Sounds like he doesn't deserve to have a song about him if you ask me.
10-08-2006, 02:19 PM
bipper

You already wrote it chum.

-he steals my friends
-he makes fun of me behind my back
-he thinks that hes all that
-his friends thinks that hes sweet,but when there not there,hes mean.
-he lies alot.

-F U [NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAME]!
F!
U!

(enter obligotory verse about how your father hates you and/or your girlfried dumping you so that the song will sky rocket up the billboard charts.)

Seven Dust's Enemy would be a good inspirational template

Bipper
10-08-2006, 03:29 PM
Shoeberto

See pretty picture with lady inside
It look delicious, me fit to be tied!
Me love to eat it with sugar and cream
But no no no! Me know the rules!
Picture exciting, but not for biting!

(Cookie is joined by a 'back-up trio' of female Cookie lookalikes)

Don't eat the pictures, no no no
Don't eat the pictures, no no no
Don't eat the pictures -- NO!
When you go to museum!

See pretty mummy, oh ho ho ho
It made in Egypt long time ago
Me love to bake it, or broil it, or steam
But no no no! Me know the rules!
Mummy look yummy, but not for tummy!

Don't eat the mummies, no no no
Don't eat the mummies, no no no
Don't eat the mummies -- NO!
When you go to museum!

You open mouth, feed in carrots
Cakes and cookies and pie
But pictures aren't cookie, they're meant for looking
So if hungry, eat with your eyes!

See pretty statue, so smooth and so white
It look like ice cream -- me long for a bite!
Me love to nibble -- but me wouldn't dream!
'Cause no no no, me know the rules!
Statue for viewing, it not for chewing!

Don't eat the statue, no no no
Don't eat the statue, no no no
Don't eat the statue -- NO!
When you go to museum!
10-08-2006, 08:20 PM
sephirothishere

Quote:

GUITAR SOLO!
*GUITAR SOLO*

i can do that...thats easy...ill go malmsteen on your asses......i know malmsteen isnt great at the whole songwritin thing....but neither am i....so thats who i sound like.....and i have great technique too.....hahahhah......