Originally Posted by
Rocket Edge
I love them. I especially like the Carbuncle - you really nailed the stance and it makes it jump out of the page even without colour. I'd take some time to colour it in as in the last pic you did a cool job introducing tones. I like the Rinoa one too, particularly the face, but there is some proportion issues. The actual length of the body doesn't seem wrong, just some of the limbs. I'm sure you can see some things that might be off but maybe didn't bother to change it. I'd advise doing a quick sketch out of your head of a face, and keep drawing and rubbing out the body until you feel it fits properly. You'll be surprised how much you'll learn about proportion.
Really nice work, keep it up! :spin: