[A] Cyclops

So yeah, I just decided to start sketching Cyclops for some reason.

http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n...e9/cyclops.jpg

I'll probably finish it tomorrow after college. What do you think so far? ;o

So far it's rather nice. I'd really like to see some more shadows and colours on it, though! :) But, I guess that's what you'll do next?

I'd like to see the finished result. Are you going to add any colour?

Not bad for sure!

I like it a lot!Very dynamic.

I was just gonna finish it in black and white, I don't have anything good to colour it with, really.

Are you going to finish it in pencil or ink? :]

he's so bulky!

Your hair lines suggested a greater degree of turning of the head than is drawn. His right side hair line, not your right...should be further back.

Notice how a face should be round , with rounded edges. observe how the hair line in that spot flattens out the face there. It sound be angled further back , to give a correct sense of the facing being rounded.

The drawing suggest that the top of his head is able to be screwed off or around and has been turned off the axis of the rest of the face.

The rest is pretty damn good. :)