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    That's okay,it's just that some people don't like it when their 'perfect' ideas are challanged.
    Please feel free to read my take on the official novalisation of Dissidia Final Fantasy at this link:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Darth Anarcus View Post
    Sorry for having an opinion.
    Quote Originally Posted by jammi567 View Post
    That's okay,it's just that some people don't like it when their 'perfect' ideas are challanged.
    A'yo. jammi567's right. That's your idea. The only person that can change it is you. But A'yo, I dobt anyone challange mine. It works for everyone.
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    I wouldnīt want to change a thing in the storyline, FF8 was the first FF game I ever played and I love it more than any other game I have played.

    I donīt see anything that isnīt good with the storyline, and the characthers are so lovely I loved them all. But the only thing I didnīt really like was the part were the most of the characthers knew each others as kids.

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    Everything about the game (including the story) was to my liking. I wouldn't change a thing
    ...Geddit?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bart's Friend Milhouse View Post
    Everything about the game (including the story) was to my liking. I wouldn't change a thing
    Quote Originally Posted by Angel_from_hell View Post
    I wouldnīt want to change a thing in the storyline, FF8 was the first FF game I ever played and I love it more than any other game I have played.

    I donīt see anything that isnīt good with the storyline, and the characthers are so lovely I loved them all. But the only thing I didnīt really like was the part were the most of the characthers knew each others as kids.
    A'yo, same here. The first Final Fantesy and the first game to ever influence me to the person I am today. Wouldn't chage a thing. Although, black girl asses is the s*** son.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Darth Anarcus View Post
    I would change...the following:

    1. The orphanage revelation. That was quite unanimously considered crap by everyone, fan and non-fan alike.

    2. The characters saw all kinds of war during the course of the game. War changes you. It's a proven fact. Yet the only one who changed was Squall? That's lazy writing and needs to be remedied. Let Irvine become the hero he aspired to be. Let Selphie learn to not be so naive and grow up. And Zell... Kill him off. He was completely useless and contributed absolutely nothing to the story at all, neither the plot nor personal character developement.
    sounds good to me!

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    Where to begin...

    First, build better backstories for everyone...

    Quistis' infatuation with Squall should have been dragged out a bit longer. She got dissed and drops it about a few hours into the plot and yet she brings it up again at the end? She really needs to stand up and show us the "child prodigy" the game tries to make her out to be. We need more scenes of her taking charge and kicking ass like the Dollet invasion.

    Selphie could have matured a bit more as the story progressed, I also wish they had done more with her "relationship" with Irvine.

    Zell, good lord... First, I would have actually done something with the tidbit of information that was released about him on the offical site, waaaay back before it came out. They mention Zell became a SeeD and studied martial arts because of his close relationship with his late grandfather. I think the game briefly mentions him when you go to Zell's house but nothing more. This information here has a wealth of potential to show off a better less annoying side of his character.

    Irvine, didn't bother me too much. I wish he had done more hinting of the stupid "orphanage" twist instead of laying it out there like it came out of left field:rolleyes2 I also would have liked to see him mature as a soldier as well.

    Rinoa, needs something to make her standout more. As much story as they put into her, I still feel she was rather forgettable. I probably would have completely dropped her relationship with her father cause it makes her seem more childish than likable. I think I would have made her more of an opposite to Squall than she really was. She should have had a zest for life and been more optimistic. You know, the way she appears to be when she first showed up at the dance. It would have made her sorcerous plot twist more compelling. Everyone's worried and here she is being "Miss Positive" and assuring them she's alright even though you know it's "not going to be alright".

    Seifer, is probably the greatest disappointment of FFVIII. He has such potential to be a wonderful character and gets relegated to "thug" status. "Thug" status belongs to little bitches like Raijin and Fuijin, not guys like Seifer. First, Seifer should have played a larger role in the overall story. Pushed the whole rivalry, maybe let Edea/Ultemacia give him some real power so he can put up a fight. Second, we should have made the love triangle something real; instead of mentioning that one could start and never talking about it again... Show the softer more lovable side of Seifer, the one that wanted to become a "knight" to protect his "queen". It would have made for a compelling relationship between him and Squall as well as add to Squall relationship with Rinoa.

    Ultemacia needs a better motive. She wants to become a god but why? To destoy SeeDs? She already accomplished that in her own time line. The least they could have done is said that being hunted by SeeD all her life made her mind snap, so she decided to compress time and become a god to eliminate all SeeD's from history. It's still a lousy motive but at least it's better than just showing up and saying you wanted to be a god even though time compression looked like something that was going to erase the existence of all life to accomplish anyway...

    Plot elements that needed to be touched up...

    The orphanage twist. I wouldn't get rid of it completely. I would have ran with it cause it created an interesting element in the story, which was completely dropped after it was mentioned. I would first have Irvine hint more to his knowledge of everyone and Edea. I also would have made Selphie be similiar since she's the next SeeD member that has had the least GF contamination. I liked the idea of the GF's stealing the parties memories in exchange for power. It could have created an interesting moral dilemna. Watching Squall and the others lose their memories as the story goes along. The love story could have been made even better by having a point late in the game, where Squall is trying to remember what he's trying to protect and all you can see from his memory is a fuzzy image of Rinoa. It all could have been so intersting and create a really compelling story but no we decide to make the story focus on time travel :rolleyes2

    I wish we could have had an explanation of how Ellone got her powers. I would have liked to see the party remember more about their pasts as the story went along. I also would have appreciated a little more info on the GF's and their relationship to the world.

    These touch ups and FFVIII could actually live up to it's potential. BTW as harsh as I seem, I actually like FFVIII. It's not my favorite but I don't necessarily feel it's the worse game in the series either. I just saw a game with a lot of potential and I just wanted to see it live up to it. That's all

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wolf Kanno View Post
    Where to begin...

    First, build better backstories for everyone...

    Quistis' infatuation with Squall should have been dragged out a bit longer. She got dissed and drops it about a few hours into the plot and yet she brings it up again at the end? She really needs to stand up and show us the "child prodigy" the game tries to make her out to be. We need more scenes of her taking charge and kicking ass like the Dollet invasion.

    Selphie could have matured a bit more as the story progressed, I also wish they had done more with her "relationship" with Irvine.

    Zell, good lord... First, I would have actually done something with the tidbit of information that was released about him on the offical site, waaaay back before it came out. They mention Zell became a SeeD and studied martial arts because of his close relationship with his late grandfather. I think the game briefly mentions him when you go to Zell's house but nothing more. This information here has a wealth of potential to show off a better less annoying side of his character.

    Irvine, didn't bother me too much. I wish he had done more hinting of the stupid "orphanage" twist instead of laying it out there like it came out of left field:rolleyes2 I also would have liked to see him mature as a soldier as well.

    Rinoa, needs something to make her standout more. As much story as they put into her, I still feel she was rather forgettable. I probably would have completely dropped her relationship with her father cause it makes her seem more childish than likable. I think I would have made her more of an opposite to Squall than she really was. She should have had a zest for life and been more optimistic. You know, the way she appears to be when she first showed up at the dance. It would have made her sorcerous plot twist more compelling. Everyone's worried and here she is being "Miss Positive" and assuring them she's alright even though you know it's "not going to be alright".

    Seifer, is probably the greatest disappointment of FFVIII. He has such potential to be a wonderful character and gets relegated to "thug" status. "Thug" status belongs to little bitches like Raijin and Fuijin, not guys like Seifer. First, Seifer should have played a larger role in the overall story. Pushed the whole rivalry, maybe let Edea/Ultemacia give him some real power so he can put up a fight. Second, we should have made the love triangle something real; instead of mentioning that one could start and never talking about it again... Show the softer more lovable side of Seifer, the one that wanted to become a "knight" to protect his "queen". It would have made for a compelling relationship between him and Squall as well as add to Squall relationship with Rinoa.

    Ultemacia needs a better motive. She wants to become a god but why? To destoy SeeDs? She already accomplished that in her own time line. The least they could have done is said that being hunted by SeeD all her life made her mind snap, so she decided to compress time and become a god to eliminate all SeeD's from history. It's still a lousy motive but at least it's better than just showing up and saying you wanted to be a god even though time compression looked like something that was going to erase the existence of all life to accomplish anyway...

    Plot elements that needed to be touched up...

    The orphanage twist. I wouldn't get rid of it completely. I would have ran with it cause it created an interesting element in the story, which was completely dropped after it was mentioned. I would first have Irvine hint more to his knowledge of everyone and Edea. I also would have made Selphie be similiar since she's the next SeeD member that has had the least GF contamination. I liked the idea of the GF's stealing the parties memories in exchange for power. It could have created an interesting moral dilemna. Watching Squall and the others lose their memories as the story goes along. The love story could have been made even better by having a point late in the game, where Squall is trying to remember what he's trying to protect and all you can see from his memory is a fuzzy image of Rinoa. It all could have been so intersting and create a really compelling story but no we decide to make the story focus on time travel :rolleyes2

    I wish we could have had an explanation of how Ellone got her powers. I would have liked to see the party remember more about their pasts as the story went along. I also would have appreciated a little more info on the GF's and their relationship to the world.

    These touch ups and FFVIII could actually live up to it's potential. BTW as harsh as I seem, I actually like FFVIII. It's not my favorite but I don't necessarily feel it's the worse game in the series either. I just saw a game with a lot of potential and I just wanted to see it live up to it. That's all

    HOLY S***!!!!! You must really hate this game. Basterd...
    A'yo son, TTR WAS HERE!!!
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    To me, i wouldn't like to change anything about it, because everything worked for a reason. It made one hell of a game, so i'd leave it the way it is.

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    I adore this game's plot . I wouldn't want it to change. The only thing I would add is some more important screentime for Quistis and Irvine =o.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Traffic View Post
    To me, i wouldn't like to change anything about it, because everything worked for a reason. It made one hell of a game, so i'd leave it the way it is.
    ^_^
    So... tell me something, intrigue me. Please do.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TyphoonThaReapa View Post

    HOLY S***!!!!! You must really hate this game. Basterd...
    I don't hate the game, I found it to be rather charming . I just feel it has some major flaws and I wished to address them. I also thought it would be more interesting to give more detailed answers rather than

    Better background, better motive for Ultemacia, and get rid of the orphanage plot twist...

    I may have come off "overly critical" but it's only cause I care

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wolf Kanno View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by TyphoonThaReapa View Post

    HOLY S***!!!!! You must really hate this game. Basterd...
    I don't hate the game, I found it to be rather charming . I just feel it has some major flaws and I wished to address them. I also thought it would be more interesting to give more detailed answers rather than

    Better background, better motive for Ultemacia, and get rid of the orphanage plot twist...

    I may have come off "overly critical" but it's only cause I care
    A'yo, I see where you commin' from.
    A'yo son, TTR WAS HERE!!!
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    Some people are more critical then others it like with the new final fantasy game I have played it for a couple of days and I think its really good then you come on here and theirs about 8 threads saying how crap it is I think some people play games and think of things to say that are wrong about it instead of enjoying the game.

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