Speaking of which, there should have been in-battle comments by the characters, like in FFX-2.
Your post was cool until this.
Fran sounds like Bjork. This is not a good thing.
You added a "not" in your comment where there shouldn't have been one.
My Cure spell brings all the boys to the yard,
And they're like: "It's better than yours."
Damn right, it's better than yours!
I could Heal you, but I have to charge.