Perhaps I'm alone on this, but I feel like something this important to a story (because let's face it, this reconstruction is half (or more) of the focus throughout the work) should be something the author calls his or her own.
If you really just meant to toss some ideas back and forth, that's fine, I guess. When I read the first post, however, it just sounded like you were begging for someone to figure out the problem for you. If you want to bounce ideas off of a sounding board (someone you trust to be honest), it'd probably be more effective to at least communicate over instant messanger.
That all being said, it is your book; you can write it however the hell you want. My opinion isn't an absolute, though I apologize as I seem to present it as such, but I hope it made you think about responsibilities to yourself as a writer.




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