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    davory7's signatures

    I'm new member of this forum, altough I'm very active on similar one.
    Here are my latest 2 works, C&C please!




    (made for contest)





    Last edited by davory7; 07-27-2007 at 10:13 PM.

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    I love the squall one

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    They look beautiful, but I don't like the font on either. It's a little more of a problem with the Squall banner then they lying hoe one, though To me, it just looks too generic and clashes against the pretty picture.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Timerk View Post
    They look beautiful, but I don't like the font on either. It's a little more of a problem with the Squall banner then they lying hoe one, though To me, it just looks too generic and clashes against the pretty picture.
    Ye, i know, text is my biggest problem. Need to improve that a lot. Any tips?

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    It won't be necessary...
    On the first one you could put Centyru Gothic with a shadow
    On the last one you could have used Arial with an outline

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    Well I think that your font is great..better than mine no doubt..The first font if you lower the size it'll be nicer than ever..and the 2nd one no doubt the font is kinda choppy..other than that..those are two great sigs.I can't even make half as good as that.


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    Added new signature - ghostrider.
    Thx to all for your comments.
    Need some constructive comments about background, lighting, text, border...

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    Your sigs are excellent!! i assume your not a beginner, but a veteran!

    About the ghost rider, it's perfect! no need for a fixture there! good job

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    Quote Originally Posted by davory7 View Post

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    Really great text! An Advice put a light focus on one part of teh sig so it'll stand outa bit more because it's a bit confusing!
    Apprt from that awsome

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    Quote Originally Posted by -=Squall-Leonhart=- View Post
    Your sigs are excellent!! i assume your not a beginner, but a veteran!

    About the ghost rider, it's perfect! no need for a fixture there! good job
    You're right - i'm not begginer. But also not a veteran...

    @all
    Thx for comments - new works will be added soon!
    Last edited by davory7; 07-15-2007 at 09:15 PM.

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    I have to comment again. You're just so much better than me

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    you're overdoing the C4D renders. Try to blur most of the stuff behind the main render and keep a few C4D renders unblurred to get that depth feel. Right now, it's all in the foreground and i have no idea what i'm seeing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by atlanteay View Post
    you're overdoing the C4D renders. Try to blur most of the stuff behind the main render and keep a few C4D renders unblurred to get that depth feel. Right now, it's all in the foreground and i have no idea what i'm seeing.
    Finally some constructive critics. Ty man, I'll try to follow your advice in my further sigs!

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