Ah, your father has a wonderful face for photography and/or drawing, I must say. Full of character due to the wrinkles, folds, and brow. A very nice subject.

None of them really shine as any more than candid shots, but the last one would look simply stunning in black and white and with a bit of work in the darkroom / filters and the like in Photoshop to heighten the sense of contrast and varying values.

Try to localize your flash / light a little better as well, so that you bring the focal point to a stronger position.


Other than that, they look nice, but have room for improvement.

I look forward to what else you may do.