I really like this one.. a lot! I love that it's somewhat sketchy looking and that you've put your own personal style of drawing into it, rather than just trying to do it like e.g. Nomura. I adore your colouring (water colours I presume?), which provides some life and dynamic to the drawing. Just the fact that it's water colours(?) makes it more abstract and I really like that. Great job! I look forward to seeing more from you