i need help.

[NeoTifa]

oh i know. and i did. i told you i didnt know what i was doing or how to go about it. :\ but here it is!!! version 2.0 beginning!!! *chrous of angels sing blissfully in the background*

As a very goal oriented person, I have dreamt and achieved many things so far in my life. I have received a gold belt in karate, several softball trophies, a couple of cheerleading trophies, my varsity letter for marching band, other various band patches, several academic awards, induction into two different national honor societies, and countless local and national awards through AFJROTC. One of the biggest goals so far that I’m still looking forward to achieving is to be a fighter pilot in the United States Air Force. Ever since I was little I wanted to fly an F-16, but now I realise with the new advances in technology, I could fly an F-22, or even work on them. Being a computer or aeronautics engineer is my ideal career choice and I think your college will help me go in the right direction.

Being in AFJROTC for four years, I have valuable leadership and teamwork experience. I have held 14 leadership positions in the corps, and when I was flight commander, I lead my flight to victory during our quarterly flight competition last year. Tecumseh High School and Greene High School each year host a summer leadership camp, and I have attended it three times. Drill team has also been a big part of my life and has taught me teamwork, leadership, military bearing, discipline, and pride.

All of my hard work, perseverance, and dedication has gotten me through also 6 years of marching band. Working with others in a close proximity was never one of my strong points, but since I’ve been through almost anything with the other band members, I have become quite the people person. I have helped others cope with depression, boyfriend/girlfriend trouble, racist comments, and other such problems, so I feel now that I could help others and myself through almost anything now. An example of my good mediation skills is during band camp, I was section leader for the trombones, and my section was the only section not fighting amongst themselves and we even all sat together at meals.

As you can see, I have several good traits that will get me through college, the military, and life just fine. I am sure that I will do your school good and I will make you extremely proud should you accept me into your school. My hard work and organized life style has gotten me this far, it would be a shame if I didn’t get in. I have other good traits, but I guess you will have to see for yourselves this fall.



well, i ran outta time. this is the final version. take it or leave it