Keep the text, I love it. I like it so far and honestly I see nothing wrong with it. However seeing as how you gave such a detailed error report, I'll wait to see the final product. So far though, so good.Originally Posted by ShunNakamura
Well I am running into some serious creative block. Here is a WIP concept that I have worked on. It needs some cleaning up. It looks like some of the areas I thought I could avoid redrawing do need redrawn. Stupid light screen caps.
Namely the splotches on the hands[Though I suppose some people could like them], but there are also some spots in the hair that are being difficult. Plus there are some complications stemming from the shoulder that I had to redraw. It shouldn't take long to redraw(in comparison to how many hours I have already put in) but I figured I would throw this out here and see if it was even in the ballpark of what you wanted.
Edit: Note: the text is a place holder. Since you didn't specify I just made that text for the luls. Bad puns rock!
