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    YouTube - Final Fantasy X
    This was the first video I ever made. lol What do ya think??

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    I think this is in the wrong forum =)
    Next time, I do believe AMV's are to be put in Art

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    Quote Originally Posted by Proxy View Post
    I think this is in the wrong forum =)
    Next time, I do believe AMV's are to be put in Art
    That's funny, I don't see a reported post in my inbox or a "Cid's Knight" title under your name, smarty. *kick*

    But m'kay I'll most it to Art. Why not?

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    Sorry, next time I'll post there!

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    It's fine.

    I just finished watching the video. I thought it was very good for a first try. I enjoyed it and I don't even like FFX.

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    pretty cool
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    Here comes my opinion as an AMV editor.

    Intro: Needs more changes. The long cut got on my nerves. Plus when you did change, it was rather jumpy, no connection really.
    Guitar comes in: Nicely done, the synch was very nice.
    Singer starts: Where is the change? Something should have changed there.
    Rest of the song: The clips used where too long, a lot of good oppotunities for clip changes were missed.
    Guitar solo: The pacing was completely off. Slow, emotional scenes with fast guitar riffs just didn't fit.
    When the opening riff returns: The synch here was nice, it worked. It was nice up until near the end until it got a bit incoherent

    Overall: No techincal issues I can see, bar what looks like downloaded footage, but that could just be Youtube. But I really couldn't see the overall point to this video, it seemed jumpy and incoherent at times; there was no connection between the sections of clips you used, no message.
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    Quote Originally Posted by starseeker View Post
    Here comes my opinion as an AMV editor.

    Intro: Needs more changes. The long cut got on my nerves. Plus when you did change, it was rather jumpy, no connection really.
    Guitar comes in: Nicely done, the synch was very nice.
    Singer starts: Where is the change? Something should have changed there.
    Rest of the song: The clips used where too long, a lot of good oppotunities for clip changes were missed.
    Guitar solo: The pacing was completely off. Slow, emotional scenes with fast guitar riffs just didn't fit.
    When the opening riff returns: The synch here was nice, it worked. It was nice up until near the end until it got a bit incoherent

    Overall: No techincal issues I can see, bar what looks like downloaded footage, but that could just be Youtube. But I really couldn't see the overall point to this video, it seemed jumpy and incoherent at times; there was no connection between the sections of clips you used, no message.
    This is the best critique of this kind of area, She's a master of AMVs... if you intend on making more definetly work off of these outcomes and become superfly~

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    awsome




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