I have to say first that your style is very unique and it makes your art really pop out. I love the first one, her dress is just gorgeous, but she looks a bit too thin.
For the second, well the idea behind her design looks like a great concept, her head and hair are just too big for her body to support. So you might want to either shrink her head or enlarge the rest of her body, probably a mixture of both. Once that is done she will look absolutely stunning.
The first is a model x) So yeah, she's a bit of a coathanger. And the second one was meant to be sort of super-deformed :o but if she still looks a bit weird I can thicken up the rest of the body next time.
Okay, here is my attempt at constructive criticism for your last post, although I've already told you I'm not very good at it. xD
The first girl has a very nice outfit and hairdo, but her pose and expression are both sort of uninteresting. She's not really doing anything, and it makes the picture a bit dull to look at, which leads me to the second girl:
This one, on the other hand, has a more dynamic pose. Her hair gives the picture gravity and pull and clearly defines one main point of interest, the face. Her face, however, is a bit bland. The expression tells no tales, so to say. The differently coloured eyes give back some visual interest to the face, though. I love how you coloured this piece! The hair ornaments and overall quirky drawing style are great, too.
Thanks to everyone who's posted! I really really appreciate all of this, so thank you very much
Rantz, I tried to make the second look kind of, I dunno, apathetic and tired? Maybe I didn't push it enough. I'll keep that in mind.
double post gasp yes I know, sorry sorry
hair phailure. Everything I want badly to look good turns out the worst ):< Terra's dress is pretty much the only redeemable quality this thing has.
I dunno, I also like how you did Celes' butt.I also like the colouring of her blue tunic thing.
a proofs
proofs that i am not dead, i am working on the ff 500 thing, also on another collab with a friend. damn you hands.
Boudica if she were a complete pansy.
Watercolour pencil & pen!
WITTY COMMENT.
(I really dig the hair)
oh scrumppy!you never fail to amaze me! kudos my dear cookie monster...kudos!
more FF500 project, the thing with my friend I don't think I should show you until it's done, because it's hers as well...
If it looks like the colours are kind of dark, I'm sort of going to try and make her look luminescent and shiny by starting dark and buidling up the light? I dunno.
FINISHHHHH
if you want to full view it visit my devart dag nab it!
I like it!
You know... a lot of your drawings look like something you'd find in a fashion designers sketch book. I would know because one of my friends is majoring in fashion designing where I'm going to school.
My sig and avy are made by me.
Thanks! I'd love to be a fashion designer, and yeah fashion figures are so much fun to draw, they're wonderful. I don't know if I've got the talent though, and I certainly wouldn't fit into the industry.
Playing at being a suckier Emmy Cicierega!
This is a shockingly fun and easy way to do your flats! I love it.
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