
Originally Posted by
champagne supernova
This is of course a matter of opinion. I felt that XIIs story lacked something. But I have not analysed it in great detail, which I think you (being WK) has. It also took me several months to finish it, which probably did not help.
I have knocked this point in continuously, but I'll repeat it again. When I travelled through the Sandsea (which seems like a ripoff from Dune), I did not get any dialogue. That took me a couple hours. The trip to Archades, same.
What I did enjoy was the NPCs and the hunts, because those little stories were really interesting.
I have read your analysis of XII and I understand where you are coming from. But I do not think it was effectively told. It's great being subtle, but if you're being subtle, you are going to have to have a lot more body for most people to pick it up. And when you have 4 hour treks before you get to the next progression of the story, you really start forgetting the subtleties.