Quote Originally Posted by Wolf Kanno View Post
Its not bad, but to be honest, Kingdom Hearts: Final Mix greatly expanded the story from Riku's point of view and explained a great deal of his journey and how he met Maleficent. Still, I feel you have some good potential for a fanfic at least, I just recommend doing some research from the the game.
Final Mix needs to come to the U.S. then.

As far as the OP is concerned, it seems rather dry. The story is becoming overdone a bit with all of the spin-offs.