@thatoneguy: I don't understand your concept of meaningless things. Do you mean the pilot page and the page that shows the rough work before it's been touched up? Those things are just bonuses, it's not like they're taking away from anything. As for what you said about the start being crap, you're not really telling me why you think that way. Does jumping into the action not help? Is it the lack of context? Please be more specific when you're criticising me, so I can make things better.

@Rebellious Eagle: Thank you for your support. I have pages up to ten drawn up right now, but they're not completely finished yet. I have storyboards set up till page twenty-something, right now.

@arcanedude34: No, the hat isn't going to be a main character. I wanted the hat to have a face that mirrors Jack's emotions, but it didn't turn out that well.

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