I think it could have ended at the second panel, having got the point across by then! The rest was just excessive violence from a previously rational guy and lots of profanity from both parties! The drawings were nice at a certain level of bad!
I wasn't trying to be funny though, I was making a point>>> It was funny until panel number 2, the other 2 in the end were kind of weak..
Nice try though, just keep working on your jokes.
I made it get all excessive to demonstrate how angry politically correct people get when they don't have their way, and how fed up others get when being pushed into a corner by arbitrary laws (this was made when smoking was banned where I live)
Also as far as keep trying, I just made a few one day when I was stoned and had nothing better to do. It was a one time thing. Thanks though
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Heh no worries, I probably should've elaborated. I was going for more of a "heh, true" response than an L.O.L. , that's my story and I'm sticking to it
And yeah, smoking is banned here unless of course you're in your own home and certain parts of the public outdoors. It's actually like that in quite a few American and Irish cities as well, to varying degrees.
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