A good start. Some tips:

-Start a blog or something to keep these somewhere else on the internet. Even if you have a copy of them on your computer, it's nice to have a sort of portfolio that you can easily point to.

-Speaking of 'having a copy on your computer', I suggest you run these through a word processor first. Take this as constructive criticism, rather than an attack. I can ignore spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes in any normal internet conversation, but you are presenting this as a more serious article. A word processor will at the very least catch any words you misspell, anything you've incorrectly capitalized and some of the more noticeable grammatical errors. The imagery of your flowery prose (which is fluffy and unnecessary in my opinion) is instantly shattered when one can see your basic grasp of written English is flawed.

But it's a good start. You know what you're saying, just gotta focus more on the little things.