Any of you guys wanna try again with my first scene? I'm also working on another scene that will be posted later on.
Is that your final answer?
What do you mean?
Is that your final answer?
If no one wants to try the first one, let's bring up a new one.
Zidane is very interested in Terra, although she likes Tidus. She acts very flirtatious with him, and has a HUGE crush on him, even to the point of starting at him in class (even while taking a test) while making tons of flirty poses, and sent him a ton of love-notes. Tidus doesn't want to go out with her because the way she flirts makes him nervous, but at the same time, he doesn't want to tell her that he doesn't like her because he is afraid of her esper powers, so he talks to Aki (who he has a crush on, but she only wants to be his friend) about what he should do, as he holds up a big pile of love-notes that Terra gave to him. Aki states that perhaps he should go out with Terra, but Tidus thought they were still trying to get her and Zidane together, so they decide to have a double date for dinner at a restaurant; she will date Zidane, and he will date Terra.
Hopefully this time, you'll post up dialogue that contains at least 10 lines, but if you want to do more, go on ahead; I'll also post up my own as an example soon, but what I will judge are everyone else's captions other than my own to see which is best.
Happy captioning!
Is that your final answer?
*sigh* Since no one is trying yet, I'll post one up:
*Aki walks over to Tidus, who is holding up a bunch of love-notes given to him by Terra*
Tidus: These are love-notes.
Aki: Uh-oh, from Terra?
Tidus: Uh-huh! And try taking a test while she's staring at you with big puppy eyes, suggestive smiles and kiss-blowings, and striking tons of flirtatious poses! I couldn't concentrate that good on my test because she was staring at me THE WHOLE TIME! Seriously, she was acting like this!
*Tidus imitates Terra by making flirty poses while smiling suggestively and kiss-blowing excessively with big puppy eyes*
Aki: Please never make those faces again.
Tidus: What's it gonna take to make Terra understand? I don't wanna go out with her!
*Tidus puts Terra's love-notes in the trash bin*
Aki: Um, maybe you should go out with Terra.
Tidus: Why? I thought you were still trying to get her and Zidane together.
Aki: Yes, I am; I think he chose me for his date on that game as a strategic move to change plans for the date tonight; I'll date him tonight, and perhaps you can have Terra join us so that we can have a double-date.
Tidus: I don't know if that's such a good idea...
Aki: If I were you, I'd do it, because if you don't, she'll get mad at you. Don't forget that she's part-esper, so if you say no to her, she'll unleash her scary powers on you!
Tidus: Uh-oh... Aki, it's not that I don't like her; I mean, she's a very sweet girl, and she's very cute too, but it's just that the way she flirts makes me nervous.
Aki: Well then, tell her that at our double-date tonight. Tell her that her flirting style makes you nervous, but don't dump her, and she'll understand.
Tidus: Okay then, let's double-date.
Last edited by SuperMillionaire; 01-06-2010 at 07:38 PM.
Is that your final answer?
*snip* - No! I've deleted one of your posts in this thread already. If you can't say anything constructive or contribute to the thread, please refrain from posting at all! Saves us both some hassle and saves you looking like a butt. Thank you. -Rantzien
Oops, sorry, what did I do?
Is that your final answer?
Oh, not you, that was me leaving a message for arcanedude34. You can carry on with the thread if you want to.
I'm not really feeling that creative right now, sorry.![]()
Oh... okay...
Is that your final answer?