Ooooh, this is a great idea for an event!
Ooooh, this is a great idea for an event!
I give scores at which an average is a 5, that's what my initial score is for every piece, not scores between 8 and 10 like in the gaming magazines. If you don't like it, go sodomize a monkey.
Well done piece. I like the shading, and the detail on the hair is fantastic. However, it seems like there is more detail on some of the non important parts than on the facial features. The description adds some realism, which leads me to a final score of a 7. Well done, well above average.
Score: 7
Interesting set-up, but it is a bit unstructured. It's not bad, but not above average.Category: Writting
"Is It Possible..."
Is it possible to be alone?
Forever?
To be ignored?
Uncared for?
Not be loved?
Is it because I’m not cool?
Not loud enough?
Not nice enough?
Don’t care enough?
What have I done wrong?
What am I doing wrong?
Am I ugly?
Do I scare you?
Why am I not what you want?
Why doesn’t anyone like me for me?
Is there someone out there for me?
They must not be around here,
Where are you?
What do I have to do to find you?
I continue to look for you…
Description:
Not too much to say, I think it speaks for itself. This was the poem I wrote one day in biology class, which inspired the drawing above. Pretty negative/self critasizing, but thats how silly I felt back then :P
So theres something to get the ball rolling, feel a bit strange being the first to put something up...
Score: 5
I'm not much for fashion, so I don't have many comments. But it's creative nonetheless.
Score: 6
team name:
STOP POSTING ON THE INTERNET AND GET TO MAKING MY DINNER ALREADY
(it is very catchy)
that or The Schlong Brigade. The Photo Thread Creepers. The Dudes Who Want Nudes. The That Shirt Makes You Look Fats.
I wish I was artistic. :-(
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I will add one point to every piece if you pick this name.STOP POSTING ON THE INTERNET AND GET TO MAKING MY DINNER ALREADY
Same with topless pictures of the female team. (see? I don't discriminate)
Yeah don't worry Becky I'm just throwing suggestions out there and my bros can comment on the ones they like or maybe even toss ones of their own into the mix. We'll come to a decision.
Spoilsport.
The female team must be called NAME DECIDE!
just sayin
EDIT: OKAY NEVERMIND
Last edited by Old Manus; 06-07-2010 at 07:53 PM.
there was a picture here
OK smurf it i'll submit something... i might get lucky and a judge might be feeling generous
Team: Male
Category: Poser... aparantley that's totally allowed
I spotted something semi-amusing off camera nahh, i'm going for laid back and and "don't interupt me being cool"
Category: Writing (Poetry)
I feel a creature stirring, deep within my troubled thoughts,
Unleashing fear i can't control, for i know it can't be fought,
Howling eerily in its wake, it knows its purpose and its cause,
It knows not fear nor weakness, only its new found course,
Every question falls behind as the new day is dawning,
The creature rises and transpires a revolutionary warning,
Its sight not hindered nor deceived by the mist of haunting phantoms,
Guiding me through and safely away from dark and shrouding intentions,
I follow without question as i am lead into its world,
A place of unfamiliar truths, where nothing lies untold,
The darker thoughts within my mind are defeated, forever banished,
Lonliness, confusion, fear and hatred did but simply vanish,
My nightmares fade as i am freed from tormenting resentment,
The creature slumbers as i wake, in a valley of crystal contentment.
Though it affects us all differently, we're all hit pretty hard when someone breaks our heart. Whether you put on a face or lock yourself away, whether we continue with our lives or lose our way, whether we are grateful for what we had or resentful that we lost it, we all find our way back. I havn't come up with a good title for this poem if anyone has any nice ideas?
Score: 7/10
A very nicely put together picture. It's how I feel when I can't catch any yummy frogs.
Score: 6/10
Feels like a list of stuff and none of it catches the feeling of being unable to taste yum yums.
Score: 8/10
I like how you can make such pretties from stuff in Marsh. Master Quale would love a fork holder like these
Score:7/10
The only thing that should distract you is a yummy frog getting away. Otherwise it's a good photo.
Score: 6/10
It is an interesting poem, but the rhyming attempt killed it. A lot of the words don't rhyme so well. Also is this creature caused by a lack of yummy foods? Come opver to the marsh and the Qu can make you lots of yum yums!
Yeah, this is almost too obviously the correct name. I was going to post my concern that this competition unduly discriminates against the female population by infringing on their kitchen obligations (as shown by the men being the first out of the gate with 3 submissions, with 0 from the women).