FFIV Theme of Love Fan Lyrics

[Vincent, Thunder God]

My personal favourite is Brentalfloss'. I've even sang it myself a few times. And if I ever get a girlfriend/fiancee/wife, I so want to sing this to her, or make my own custom lyrics for the song and sing that.

Lol, I would totally have that sung at my own wedding, if I ever have one. xD Overall the lyrics are pretty good, and it was sung pretty well, though the "player one and player two" verse was a tad weak, and I have no idea what purple prose is.

There's also the fan lyrics made by Jannyleinchen. It's quite a bit longer than Brentalfloss' and it's deeper in terms of the lyrics, but I like Brentalfloss' more for whatever reason.

This was OK, though the singer deviated from the original melody significantly and I'm not a huge fan of her vocal delivery. The lyrics themselves were OK, perhaps a bit too long.

I've also tried coming up with my own lyrics (taking the only lyric from the English trailer and building upon it), but I never really got that far since the lyrics I come up with after the first four never seem to really stick. This is what I have so far:

Here in the Moonlight
Standing here while the Stars Shine So Bright
Being Right Beside my Loved One Here
Knowing that I Have Nothing To Fear

Your lyrics are good, though my only constructive criticism would be that ending your verse with "here" takes away from it a bit - the flow of the lyric is affected. This is only my personal opinion though.