I listened to 7 minutes this time (an increase of 2 whole minutes). You ppl need to work on your filler. A tried and tested way to cut out silent pauses. Apart from that it wasn't smurfing terrible. You all have audio friendly voices which helps. Trust me, if you dont have one of those it can put ppl off no matter what you say.

Also. how the smurf do you ppl find the time to play all those games?