Time for me to be a jerk.

It's not horrible, but you have a lot left to go.

First, the pauldrons. You need the shoulder/upper chest plate in order to complete the ensemble. It holds the cloak out and gives more definition to the outfit. This would definitely be the hardest part of the cosplay, armor work is usually annoying. Foam is usually used by most, I believe, but there's a lot of shaping and painting to do for it.

Second, your shirt. You need a darker blue, and you need to get someone to embroider the gold trim around it.

Third, the shoes. They don't work, you need boots to pull this off.

So, yeah, sorry. I appreciate the effort, and I really like that you chose a Fire Emblem character, but it's not good enough for my taste yet. Sorry!

Now I feel horrible for being mean to Evastio.