Great job shion. Great way to summarise things.
I left Locke's first chapter deliberately confusing. My intention was to have the reader think it was Locke being chased (which is why I had to use 'he' many times over), only to then reveal Locke was the hunter himself. Not quite so sure how that went, really.
As for the victim, as you find out in Locke's second chapter, it's actually a deer they were hunting (Perhaps I should have made that slightly more obvious in the first chapter). Furthermore, Locke isn't actually the boy's father. The boy just looks up to Locke.
So, to correct your notes in the first chapter:
- A boy hunts a deer in the woods
- Locke, who was with the boy, expresses pride at the event
