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    Default My original sci-fi comic series, Lone Star!

    Hey guys! I hope you can find the time to take a look at my original comic series I've been working on. Its drawn in an anime-style, but since it's in English the reading order is from Left to Right.

    Here's some "promo" art for it:

    Click for full size and description: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...olor-452957490
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    Full size here: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...ored-433169040
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    Full size here: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...Shot-439959431
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    Full size here: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...ored-419601542
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    I haven't written a synopsis yet because I haven't finished the first volume, and the synopsis would include a big spoiler that is coming up XD

    Essentially it is a story in an age of asteroid mining during a time of scare resources and perpetual war on Earth. The main characters you first meet, Mario and Josh, are heirs to weapons dev companies and have their own set of problems. I... can't tell you too much more because um, please read it!

    COMIC ARCHIVE HERE: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/gall...one-Star-Comic

    Here's the first two pages: Attachment 56150Attachment 56151

    I could post more but this post is already image-heavy and I don't wanna annoy people XD I am grateful if you guys could take a look. There's 50 pages so far and its my first comic I've tried to make with completely original characters, as opposed to my gaming comics and FFVII Aeriseph lovey-dovey mush comic.

    Here's the Lone Star Comic link again: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/gall...one-Star-Comic
    Last edited by DrAssenov; 05-29-2014 at 07:30 PM. Reason: formatting fail XD

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    This looks pretty cool at a glance. I'll have to remember to check it out when I have some more time!

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    Holy crap! Wanna collaborate someday? I love these kinda if stories, but I can't draw well enough to do something like this I do write a lot, though, and I can do some basic character designs, and your stuff looks great and I really wanted to do a comic with someone, someday!

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    Thanks Scotty! I appreciate any time you spend looking at my comic! I forgot to mention that the comic will always be free to read online.


    White Wizard, I am glad you like my art. Thank you for taking the time to look at the comic! Right now I am swamped with projects so I don't plan on adding more to my plate. Did you draw your signature art? It looks great! Don't sell yourself short on your drawing skills. Everyone starts from somewhere and they can improve every day! It just takes tons of work and dedication.


    Thanks guys and continue to let me know what you think!

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    Haha! I wish That is official art, but still, thanks. I love my sig.

    I'll be sure to check back and give some more feedback once I've found the time to read it all! Just keep doing what you're doing because it looks awesome

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    Aw thanks! When I get more free time, I hope I can help you out with your comic! Where is your blog so that I can read your stuff?

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    Moar art! Click link for the hi-res version if it's not loading right (I am bad at this forum post thing sometimes XD)
    http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...Star-458333118

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    Here are my characters Josh, Mario, Liam, and Helen (from left to right) in a simulation in the VR room on the Lone Star Space Station. This scene hasn't happened yet in the comic, but I wanted to draw it for more "promo art."

    I hope you enjoy it!

    Comic here: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/gall...one-Star-Comic

    Artwork here: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/gall...e-Star-Artwork

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    Just gonna bump this to say that I love this comic, your style is absolutely awesome.
    Bow before the mighty Javoo!

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    Ya, thanks to you I get to see this! Awesome work!!

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    Pink Grin Thanks!

    Thanks guys for looking! I'll just keep posting more art here as I make it if it's okay with everyone.

    josh madeline_armor05fs.jpg
    Madeline and Joshua Blackstone: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...tone-460666336


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    Mario takes Madeline Fishing: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...hing-469808692


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    Jack, another character for Lone Star: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...olor-465414099

    Thank you very much for taking a look!

    Here's the link to the comic archive: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/gall...one-Star-Comic

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    I'm loving your character design. I'm a few pages behind so I'll have to catch up! So good though!

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    I like the new pictures! And this reminds me that I still need to read what you have of the comic.

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    ichigo More art!!

    Hey guys! It's been a while but I've made a few new pieces for my Lone Star online comic and wanted to share them with you. Click the links for the bigger (better) version

    Reading in Joshua's Room
    http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...ored-493139254
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    Helen vs. Joshua at the Blackstone Estate
    http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/...tate-492851281
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    Joshua makes his feelings known
    http://drassenov.deviantart.com/art/I-ship-it-492092664
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    As you can see, I like drawing castles and posh stuff and cozy rooms and fancy things. XD Thank you for taking a look.
    Here's the comic archive: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/gall...one-Star-Comic

    To see more artwork for the comic, go here: http://drassenov.deviantart.com/gall...e-Star-Artwork

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    Said it before, will say it again: I love how your artwork is so much more than just good quality art. The moments you create in the art are special ones, so different to the portraits of characters we so often see in art. Well done.
    Bow before the mighty Javoo!

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    That polo at Blackstone image is just amazing. I love it.

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