Yeah that's 2 out of like 180 people who didn't like it, I have to weigh the praise vs criticism. SqE came up with a really hacked together campy script and when you rip the brand name off it, that cringe shines through like a fat guy mooning you. I basically had to make Zack not say anything for a long time or readers would get mad that he was so full of himself and corny...THAT was the SqE concept.

So it's gotta go, most everything has to go, especially the simulation idea, but any opinions as to what people who are passionate about the series would like to see instead would be appreciated. I'm not a fan, but I'm trying to accommodate.