well actually if it was inland it would be zolom lake not sea, but other than that I think your story is pretty kool. I'd like to see a good side to sephiroth that was only really shown before on the way to neibelheim. Aria I think would be a good feature. Don't really know about weaponets, I really hate it when people just carry on and on with the same bad guy eg. majin buu on the final dbz saga. And you make Barret look like a bad guy when he arrests you.